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A7XSparx [2011-06-23 01:19:54 +0000 UTC]
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I really like your dragon's design. The fur on the wings always pleases me XD
When it comes to postion, you nailed it here. The wings are placed perfectly across from each other and overlap the body at just the right spots, and you drew them pretty good. I honestly would have a hard time doing that the way you did it here e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/> The facial expression as well is pretty good. You can tell she's afraid...or posessed, one of those. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>
Now, what's really noticable here is the line work. The lines are really wobbly, especially near the shoulder. But being someone who always used to use a mouse, which I'm assuming you used here, I KNOW how hard it is XD I see you used the straight line tool for the tail blade. It's okay to use that tool for the whole picture, it's not "cheating", it's still your art XD Another thing you can do is, scan a traditional into the computer and digitally color it, so that your linework is nicer as well as the coloring.
All in all, I like the picture. Like I say to a lot of people, you need to sharpen up the background a bit, don't just use GIMP settings to do it. The antomy is good. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/> I like how the hair is swaying in fromt of her. Nice work! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>
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Terairu [2011-06-20 20:38:39 +0000 UTC]
Siisti kuva : D
Nyt käy huonosti niille jotka Wilman suututti >: D
Jos se on edes suuttunut :'D
Eiku siitä tulee mieleen enemmin ihmettynyt. Tekee tota kai ekaa kertaa? En tiiä x'D
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Fenellathedragon [2011-06-19 08:53:15 +0000 UTC]
Wow that's beautiful and scary! I love it!
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