Comments: 16
fyoot [2013-07-22 20:49:04 +0000 UTC]
This was very clever. It bent my brain a bit at first. Awesome effort. More beginning in the middle and ending at the beginning that anyone else's I've read.
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ninjababy [2013-07-03 04:43:58 +0000 UTC]
Ahh, great punch at the end, nice!
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Atheshya [2013-07-01 22:43:36 +0000 UTC]
Very nice beginning paragraph in particular - made me quite interested to see what was going on.
I'm not so sure about the kidnapping-and-immobilizing-type aliens though: it's a little overdone in media and pop folklore. On the other hand, I like the touch about 8 cognizant species - makes me wonder what the other 7 are.
Also, she seems rather able to understand the aliens - if what they use is any kind of language, this would be pretty unlikely, and even if it was more of pictorial and conceptual thought sort of thing, they're still aliens, so even understanding that wouldn't be guaranteed.
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Atheshya In reply to Darthmat [2013-07-02 05:11:18 +0000 UTC]
They didn't look as if they were trying to have her understand them though. It appeared more as if they were talking amongst themselves and she was overhearing - so why use the universally understandable method of communication if you don't need or intend to be universally understood?
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Darthmat In reply to Atheshya [2013-07-02 05:16:40 +0000 UTC]
Their intentions and their behaviors are alien. I don't know!
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joe-wright [2013-07-01 20:49:30 +0000 UTC]
Man, what would you even do with that knowledge? Really awesome stuff.
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NamelessShe [2013-07-01 18:03:31 +0000 UTC]
Poor Karen! That would be both a blessing and a curse to know what was coming. I'll second the first comment---love the ending!
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goldfish-lovin [2013-07-01 15:40:37 +0000 UTC]
Loved the ending!
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