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Published: 2012-10-31 16:17:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 214; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 0
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pen and ink with digital color16" x 11"
Berlin Weißensee
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You have a pretty good grasp of paper space, and I enjoy the edges of the piece as much as the central landscape. I agree that some of the angles and edges are a bit off, but I think that they lend themselves to the hand drawn quality more so than perfection would. It seems a little flat, and more color variation would push and pull the forms and color, especially if you worked within your palette and just utilized color temperature. I'm very interested to see where this series is headed. Visually, it has a lot of impact, but I'm curious as to what you're trying to convey.
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Landscape is quite a difficult field to work on. I think you have done a great job at it. I like how you drew the apartment blocks. And the coloring is very good, indeed. Yet, pratice makes perfect.. keep practicing. Especially look out for the perspective. Some buildings do clash and are not where they are supposed to be. Also watch out for fine lines. Your lines have to be perfect; they cannot be tilted. You can also work more with shadowing techniques. Try having more variety of colors, maybe. You seem to have worked in 3-4 shades only. All in all, great work. Keep rocking~
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