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Published: 2014-03-14 15:21:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 603; Favourites: 28; Downloads: 2
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this is a detailed colour sketch for the 3rd place winner of Everglaves contestEK9000
hope you like her~<33
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Well you did an amazing job making the feature of the body and the clothes and you did a somewhat amazing job on the detail on the shading, but in some area it look flat and I suggest if you want to be more realistic and have a more sense of form, especially on the right hand, then you try this
1. Add shading and make it look transition from dark to light keeping in mind where light is.
2 if your light is on the left side then the far right is dark, especially on the cloth, but it wouldn't be how glass reflect light, which it seem you have, though you know very well how to but shading just need to make it more seemingly really
Though you could had just black and white if you want an anime style shading, then it would work, but you still need to define the dark and light, but apart from that shading in most area is well done and the drawing of the person is really well done and I love that you didn't just focus on every little detail of the hair and more so an impression.
Really nice job
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thank you for the review~
i think had this have been more than just a detailed colour sketch i probebly would have looked at these things more carefully
though at the same time this is a new type of sketch i was trying out with some new brushes so its nice to hear a review on this~
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I think I comment on it before I saw this, but well I do that sorry and well it look really for testing out new stuff for the first time, because sometimes it could go all wrong and you kept at it and I love that, because you aren't scared, and I love when people are passionate about their artwork like that, because you know they have a lot of talent and potential on improving, keep at it
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ahaha its ok~
artists have to take risks to find the next step and this was my one, i must admit the colouring was fun, it was really quick and easy to do this so i may try doing more of this in the future to get better on the sketches~
thank you again~
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you very much welcome and I can see you getting better at least and I take you love working with this this which is definitely an added bonus
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haha thanks~ yeah i love trying different things its quite fun to see the outcome~
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this is really cute! I really like the color theme you have going on here; Its all very light on the eyes 
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ahh thank you~ at the time i was testing out sketching with a flat brush in sai~
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thats a nice brush, it added a lot of movement to the drawing!
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hehe thanks~ i like to use it a bit now, adds some flow to things
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lighting can be hard to do and I can see why you light it that way because it look like it be in the light, but it fall the same as the left hand, but I love and I can see you improve a lot and I was wondering did this help I so hope so
and I had to look at it again and try to look at a different perspective
keep up the great work
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naww thank you~
i am trying to improve and i just wanted to try something a little different to try out some new brushes etc.
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keep at it, because you can make it really good,
I have a question what material do you like to work with and don't like to work with
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well this is on paint tool sai, so i prefer digital stuff
but in terms of traditional i dont think i have much patiance for pastles and acrylic stuff, too messy
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same here, I hate vine charcoal and compress charcoal because it messy and graphite pencil can be messy depending if you use a lot of it, but I do love charcoal pencil and drewence pencil (I can't spell it) and prism color pencil as well, though I doubt you have use them, but I think you would love them, but it can be expensive so be aware of that. Good luck improving digitally, I would look forward to it.
sorry If I went on I am passionate about it.
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charcols are ok but super smudgy so you have to spray hairspray like all the time
and yeah i prefer digital though i do believe its helping with my traditional too (strangely)
and its ok~ i dont mind (i have habits to go on a little too)
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I think it help you understand fundamental from doing digital work and can translate to your artwork and you begin to understand it a whole lot better
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yeah i mean my shading for my traditional has greatly improved if nothing else
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keep at it, I love seeing talented people
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