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dave-llamaman — Vanguard: First Contact - Chapter 10
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A short chapter, more examining the characters' inner motivations than actually showing how they are preparing for war. Once again, I'm looking for any and all feedback: am I getting the dialogue right? Does everything make sense without being overly expositional? And most importantly of all, is it any good?Previous chapters can be found here: Prologue ; Chapter 1 ; Chapter 2 ; Chapter 3 ; Chapters 4&5 ; Chapter 6 ; Chapter 7 ; Chapter 8 ; Chapter 9 ; Chapter 11 ; Chapter 12 ; Chapter 13
