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Published: 2011-07-18 19:57:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 10270; Favourites: 710; Downloads: 0
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Another screen cap.Same scene just at a different point.
I'm not going to post all the frames I do for this, but figured since you all haven't seen much of the comic in a very long time I'd post another one.
Thank you all who gave critique on my last post it helped and I've gone back to fix it.
And as before Helpful Critique is welcome on this piece as well
There is the other cap that I did for this scene
And here is the part in the very old pages that its from. [link]
(NOTE: SOME ASPECTS HAVE CHANGED SINCE THAT PAGES POST DATE)
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Comments: 22
i love it !!! it is really woow !^^ i love the poses the colors everything ^.^!
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Wow. Wish my pc wasn't broke so I could favorite this. Phone screen is to small to read the comic. Good job.
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honestly i like this one better,cause i like mystery and i have no idea whut the pup is there for XD(havent been following for very long)
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Ohhhh, very nice. 
And since you asked for a helpful critique I will do my best.
I can only really see two things. One, the slope of Nightingale's face. From the angle of her forehead, I would make her snout angle upwards a little more than where it is. If you do that, I might also turn the nose around to the left side of her face more, if that makes any sense.
Secondly, the way she's carrying Nykious looks (to me) kind of impossible. With the direction she's looking, his butt should be directly facing us, or it should be facing more to the right. I think that might look better.
I hope that helps. :3 I really love these screencaps!
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went back and tweaked the picture a bit. Thank you so much for the input. It really does help =]
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Great! C: I'm glad I could help!
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I have to say, I love how you drew that pup! Usually people draw them as specks and having the parents carry them around by their unaturally long scruff.
You're getting better every day Dawn!
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Awwww it's so cute, even though I know the moment will be sad. Really amazing job, as always, I think you should stick with this simpler style of shading and coloring, it looks less busy than some of the last few pieces you posted.
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this is so amazing<333 i luv how u made the pup <3 xD
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What is this from? I love the artwork on it.
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My comic Legacy of the night
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Really good! You may want to try a different font though, it's a bit hard to read. Other than that, totally awesome!
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which font? (none in this particular picture, and I want to know specifically which one so I can fix it.
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Not exactly sure what it's called, but the fancy writing type? Either that, or don't make the font so light. I don't know what the heck it's called. XD
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on which picture. Are you talking about this one [link] Because right now your on a picture that has absolutely no type/font
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No, it's in the series thing you're makeing. XD Turns out it was just my computer, once I settled the brightness level I could read it just fine. Sorry! haha!
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