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[link] <~ previous ~*~*~ next ~> [link]I'm breaking down XD i have to post a page. I've been on page 6 for almost over a month now, and i'm hoping this will get me to get up and finnally finnish it so i can move onto page 7 and be cought up with the part where Lonesabre catches the bunny.
Ok so just some bg info on this and the this and the last page if no one really got it; In the last page Nykamar was essentail exiled from his own kind, right now in this page he is wondering around trying to find a way back in, and to do so he sent out three of his remaining warriors to search for some sign of their own kind. And thats where we leave off now.
Please comment and leave any help critiques you have for me, i'm alwasy looking for new ways to make my comic better. And please Enjoy =]
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Is this happening at about the same time Nightstalker (im pretty sure that's his name) the wolf in the beginning of the proloue is alive, or before,(or after) cuz I'm kinda confused about that. Thanks.
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I'm reworking my story so it will be less confusing, but as a short answer that is Nightstalker, or as he is now named Nikious
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how much time did it take for you to make this page, and how much effort? just wondering, since it is REALLY good
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about a week total and a fair amount of effort
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wow 
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Lonesabre has a brilliant design. (And I love the dappled leaf shadow on him--nice detail.) XD He's just chilling while the other two freak out.
And Coppersplash's expression in panel 5=LOVE. ^^
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I always imagen tallon, when he says "my pleasure sir!" , to have a british accent...
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this is a very gorgeous comic, just got started on it
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While the wolves are kinda okay for me, I lovelovelovelovelove the background. 8D
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The pups looked embrassed/scared. LOL. I really like how Lonesabre isn't freakin' out when the other pups are.
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I love this page. xD
Nykamar is so cool. Evil, but cool. :3
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you should become a comic artist.
don't break down.you'll get it soon as allways and tit will be amazing as always
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Wonderful stuff! Your work just keeps getting better and Better Dawnfrost! Keep it up! I cant wait to see the next page
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OMG! Thats, like...WOW! Your comic skills are amazing!
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i love this page!!!!! theres some sort of sketchy touch to the characters, and that's very cool. i love how you took the time to do the leave's shadow on their backs. the wolves look very nice!
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I LOVE this!
The colors and everything are amazing! The wolves are so unique!! ^^
Good luck getting them all done~
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wow nice page!
I like Talon's fur pattern and the way he looks in panel four, but his fur pattern seems to change slightly from panels three and four.
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This is interesting ^^ I shall follow this comic like i do Off-White =3 an i mean it
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Just as always, totally amazing!! Keep up the great work and I can't wait for more!!!
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there is really no way to make this better. it is perfect. your anatomy and shading are amazing
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Love it ! 
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Slyrunner and Copperlash looks scared out of there minds. They look like they are about to get killed.
Awesome work with the emotion, and great comic.
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Cool, I like it!
One thing though, a punctuation error, in the fourth speech bubble.
There should be a comma after he says all the names. Sorry to bother you like this.
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Everything is incerdible! And your wolf designs are awesome!! 
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OHMY. D:
You do backgrounds so well!! <33 I'm so jealous!
Great job on everything. 
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I LOVE YOU. D:
I wish I had your awesomeness!1
SHARE!!!!*grabs you*
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*kidnaps talon* mine >;3 love his pelt
awsome expresions, poses, dialog, draws you in, NOW GET NEXT PAGE UP WE ALL WANNA SEEEEEE ^3^
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WOW! i love the body language and shading on this page, can't wait for more pages to come!!!
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Haha, I'm in LOVE with Talon's pose on the 3rd panel XD
All the poses and facial expressions are amazing, you get a real sense of the characters and their personalities. Keep it up!
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I love the blurs around his face in the first pannel, it looks really cool!!!
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Your backgrounds are amazing! Expessially the one in the third pannel! Its just so gooood!
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Lovely as always!
One thing, though, the word bubble in Panel three is a bit too transparent, making the words difficult to read. Also, the shadows cast on the wolves, while very well done, makes them somewhat difficult to make out. Maybe making the shadows a little less sharp and distinct would help.
Just my opinion, though.
I look forward to more!
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The first panel...super amazing love his expression. I love how the shadows on the trees above cast over the wolves; definitely makes it feel more real. The last panel, the position of the wolf is great! Another wonderful page!
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