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FluffyKitten1313 [2013-05-14 02:42:27 +0000 UTC]

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Well...okie dokie here we go

Shading: The shading, in my opinion, isn't what Id call realistic. It looks more like something that you would put on a painting. However, I do believe that it is the correct tool to use, and with a little more practice, you'll be able to get realiztic shading down.

Eyes: The eyes look out of place; While the cat has no lines, the eye does, and unfortunatly, it stands out. I get that there is practically no other way to draw the eye without line, but im sure there is something else you can do.

Cat: The cat to me is just fine, though it still needs some work.

Background: Again, needs more practice, but is still good.

Extras: You got the leaves to fit perfectly in Spottedleaf's mouth, that was indeed splendid. But, even though your much better at it than me, it could use more edge to it. The grass on the ground, the ones with leaves at the top, look strange. The stems look so delicate and clean, while the leaves look cartoonish.

All in all, I say that although you did great, you still have a lot to practice.

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kimbafan [2013-05-14 21:22:29 +0000 UTC]

WOW! That is a very pretty Spottedleaf and You have drawn her very very well! This is so awesome!

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Buchsenmacher3 [2013-05-14 03:32:46 +0000 UTC]

Wow, this is amazing I like the fur, different style, you don't see many like it.

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Speckeltail [2013-05-14 02:31:54 +0000 UTC]

Wow! This is beautiful! I really like the way you did the fur so the pattern looked like fur and not 'painted' on, as it seems on so many pictures.

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