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DawningDevil — Forever and Always part 10

Published: 2006-04-02 03:26:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 141; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Description Forever and Always

He awaits my answer.
I already told him
“No!” I had yelled
“Think about it.
I’ll wait.”
I had screamed
He had walked away
Now he thinks I’ll say yes.
But I won’t.
I remember.
He left me standing alone.
Now she’s done the same to him.
And he thinks I’ll say yes?
Does he think I forgot?
Did he forget?
I doubt it.
He awaits my answer.
So I tell him.
“I’ll never ever take you hand
Or look into your eyes with love again.
Hate for you fills me.”
“Oh. But you said you loved me
Forever and always.”
“You said it to me, too!
DID YOU!?
NO!!”
“I don’t know what to say.”
He doesn’t know what to say?!
“Then say nothing!
Just leave me alone!
I HATE YOU!!!”
He no longer awaits my answer.
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Comments: 13

jadisofeternity [2006-04-04 01:05:40 +0000 UTC]

cool serves him right. he deserved that.

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DawningDevil In reply to jadisofeternity [2006-04-05 23:25:32 +0000 UTC]

thanks. i really (for some reason unknown to me) felt the anger that she had, so it really helped in writting this one.

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jadisofeternity In reply to DawningDevil [2006-04-06 03:59:07 +0000 UTC]

ummm yeah, that does make it much easier..

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BulletProofPrincess [2006-04-03 02:44:50 +0000 UTC]

Oh no!!
What is going to happen next!!?!?!

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DawningDevil In reply to BulletProofPrincess [2006-04-03 23:37:51 +0000 UTC]

something good something bad something happy something sad.... not sure... lol...

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Royzo [2006-04-03 01:31:20 +0000 UTC]

don't hate lol

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DawningDevil In reply to Royzo [2006-04-03 23:36:59 +0000 UTC]

*sigh* just wait for a while... maybe something good will happen... (i'm not even sure... cause i don't have them all written yet...)

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Lonely-Neko [2006-04-02 05:17:11 +0000 UTC]

Aww..*sniffle* It's very good...

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DawningDevil In reply to Lonely-Neko [2006-04-02 18:53:15 +0000 UTC]

thank you... it is sad huh? oh well...

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Lonely-Neko In reply to DawningDevil [2006-04-08 04:27:09 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.. ^_^

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aeris-and-aligi [2006-04-02 04:00:05 +0000 UTC]

very good smartperson....... i kinda recagnise some of it but not all of it

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aeris-and-aligi In reply to aeris-and-aligi [2006-04-02 19:31:30 +0000 UTC]

oh okay.... yay your welcome

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DawningDevil In reply to aeris-and-aligi [2006-04-02 18:52:39 +0000 UTC]

oh, i let you read the original draft, but i've changed it since you read it so thats why... thanks for the nice comment!

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