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Here I stand,
Helpless and left for dead...
Close your eyes,
So many days go by
Easy to find what's wrong
Harder to find what's right
I believed in you, I can show you
That I can see right through all your empty lies
I won't stay long in this world so wrong
Say goodbye
As we dance with the Devil tonight
Don't you dare look at him in the eye
As we dance with the Devil tonight
Trembling
Crawling across my skin
Feeling your cold dead eyes
Stealing the life of mine
I believed in you, I can show you
That I can see right through all your empty lies
I won't last long in this world so wrong
Say goodbye
As we dance with the Devil tonight
Don't you dare look at him in the eye
As we dance with the Devil tonight
Hold on, hold on
Say goodbye
As we dance with the Devil tonight
Don't you dare look at him in the eye
As we dance with the Devil tonight
Hold on, hold on
----------------------------------------------------------|| Dance with the devil by Breaking Benjamin
Eireos fled around the corner, slipping through the mud be prepared for one last leap. He cleared the drop fence like rock soaring low over an little river. He cantered on, his breath rushed. He watched over his shoulder no sign of Aidan, bad discision. One of the stallions front hoove got stuck behind a sharp rock. Eireos gasped for breath when he tripped. With a violent, loud rumble the stallion collided to the ground. His old bones protesting. hopelessly strugling the stallion tried to get up, his eyes upon the corner. Pupils smallen in fear. He clenched his jaws when he noticed the deep cut into his pastern. Pain cut through his body like a knife stabbed in his back as he tried to put his weight onto his wounded leg. Still trying to get up, rocks slid down at the other side of the corner.
With a gentle sound yet jumped from an almost deathly height two hooves touched the ground, followed by another pair. Eireos head flew back into the direction of the corner again, agony written all over its face. A harsh wind pulled at the older stallions manes as a second stallion joined. An silky, long tail curled tail like fierce fire moving onto the wind. Eyes locked those of Eireos with the colour of warm silky burning champagne and one as cold as the snow on a cold spring day. A scary grin on the other stallions coat seemed to have his eyes locked upon him too. Was this going to be his end?
"Don't kill me please!!?" The stallions raw voice begged "My beloved son, Please don't. I love you, you know that right!"
Aidan grinned, cold and cruel yet amused "My beloved son?" he repeated before he chuckled dark, muscles rolling underneath his roaned coat. "I love you... Please don't make me want to throw up..." The stallion almost seemed to grunt sending an cold shiver through Eireos spine.
"Please, Aidan. I'm your father? You’re not going to kill your own father..."
"You’re not in the right place to lead the negotiations..." Aidan's eyes fell upon the wound and the piece of bone that showed. Eireos swallowed. Swiftly Aidan cleared the river, slowly stepping closer towards his father. Eireos started to struggle again, trying to get up. His old bones and muscles wouldn't last long in a fight against his son.
"don't you hear it? Don't you see it? Don't you feel it" Aidan muttered. Eireos watched his son puzzled but not less in fear. " Don't you hear her scream! yelling for you to stop! Stop the raping, stop the beating! Don't you remember her begging you for forgiveness!!?" Aidan shouted baring his clenched teeth. "Don't you ever wondered how much you've destroyed?! Didn't you ever feel bad? of course not it was all about yourself! Never wondered how much pain you caused her!? ... ... me?"
"don't kill me." Eireos begged again.
"me, myself and I" Aidan stepped circles around his father a while later. Slowly very slowly. "I will never kill you..." Aidan silenced still not watching his father. "I would have loved to see you suffer like you did with Callista... But I'm not you... I refuse to be a part of you and your disgusting being. "I will never kill, I will never hurt," in his mind he added only if needed " I will never lower myself to your level... never..."
----------------------------------------------------------|| Little 'preview' out of Aidan's story: This is me. (words: 573 from the grand total of 5.372 words.)
Aidan's reference
Aidan's Stat 'n Rp tracker
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Fullbody+ shading + complex background = 'Dance with the devil'
5 + 2 + 4 = 11 Stat points.
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Credits:
- Photo referance used, photo by Jello88
- 'dance with the devil' is a song of the band Breaking Benjamin.
- Aidan and story belongs to me, DawnStallion
- This artwork is part of The-Wicked-West Roleplay group which is created by Fargonon
Feel free to download right there on the right side if you want to see full detail, but don't copy, trace, use or distribute. See the credits above, I used a reference myself, why? to learn and improve my horse anatomy, studing anatomy isn't boring it's useful. So go on and practice! thank me later
Hope you like it! btw I suck at background can you tell?
Comments: 25
Fargonon [2014-04-01 21:47:46 +0000 UTC]
HE SO HAWT
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DawnStallion In reply to Fargonon [2014-04-06 20:39:33 +0000 UTC]
OMG NO YOU ARE ;u; <3
Aidan: ^///^; thank you? I'm honestly not that special
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Fillyfalls [2014-03-25 03:19:15 +0000 UTC]
This looks so amazing! I love the dark colours and Aidan's pose!
Our characters need to meet omg ♥
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DawnStallion In reply to Fillyfalls [2014-03-28 20:43:11 +0000 UTC]
D'aww thank you! again your comment means tons to me!! ;u;
And ow lord damm, they should! that would be awesome!
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Fillyfalls In reply to DawnStallion [2014-09-25 04:37:27 +0000 UTC]
Drop me a note and we can rp whenever you have time ♥
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BrindleTail [2014-03-22 22:06:30 +0000 UTC]
Oh me oh my does he look handsome!!!!!! I love the song and I loved reading his story as well!!!!
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132364 [2014-03-22 19:08:55 +0000 UTC]
I'm in love with him! Do you have time to RP now because I can't handle this cutiebutt xD
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132364 In reply to DawnStallion [2014-03-28 20:47:41 +0000 UTC]
Naaaw! He is favourite so far!
Could you begin? I am a beginner at RPing stuff. 030"
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DawnStallion In reply to 132364 [2014-04-04 12:02:36 +0000 UTC]
haha, no worries. I am too, before I joined TWW I had never rp'd before! I will drop a note into your inbox!
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karzii [2014-03-22 18:12:33 +0000 UTC]
everything about this is so stunning! the pose.. the background… all of it just goes so well together, its perfect!
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savannauni [2014-03-22 17:45:33 +0000 UTC]
OH MY God THIS STALLION IS A BABE.
//ps I don't think we get stats for this//
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DawnStallion In reply to savannauni [2014-03-22 18:20:37 +0000 UTC]
haha, aww thank you! Aidan would be fluttered as hell xD
Could you explain why not? Because this is just general art, this isn't his agility entry, just art.
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savannauni In reply to DawnStallion [2014-03-22 18:23:05 +0000 UTC]
hes so friggen cute sdfghjkl
//shoot sorry i thought this was the trail entry xD sorry
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DawnStallion In reply to savannauni [2014-03-26 01:34:46 +0000 UTC]
Haha, no worries! no worries!
I'm a rather chaotic person so keeping track of all these stat points isn't my
comfort zone, so I could've easily messed it up. So I'm Kinda really thankful
that you pinpointing it out anyway! thanks a lot!
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semper-n-aeternum [2014-03-22 17:19:38 +0000 UTC]
Oh good golly.. this is a stunning piece!! <3 For real, this is amazing. c:
And shhh, you do not by any circumstances suck at backgrounds!
It all looks great! And the story is definitely just a good.
Can't wait to see more from you! c:
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DawnStallion In reply to semper-n-aeternum [2014-03-22 18:23:24 +0000 UTC]
omg, That comment! ;u; THANK YOU SO MUCH! your just way to kind for me!
Thank you very, very much for your lovely comment my dear! It means a big lot to me!
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