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DButterfly1969 — For ones who should love me but destroyed instead
Published: 2012-10-28 22:14:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 1123; Favourites: 10; Downloads: 0
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Shattered to piecesBy the words you shout
I lie crying
I can't calm dawn
You've promised me
You won't do it ever again
But you lied, as always
Such a shame
I don't want to see you
Not ever again
I've got my own life now
Please stay away
Please let me be happy
Don't make me hate myself
It's not all your fault
But you do share a blame
And there is something I've got to say
I don't hate you mum
But stop calling all the time
I don't hate you dad
But please stay out of my life
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Comments: 13
my case isn't exactly like this...but wow, great job at putting your situation down in lines
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like the lines 'it's not all your fault but you do share a blame'. All in all a little melodramatic for my taste...
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well, it may be. i guess that's because i am very emotional and i wrote it on the day i decided not to see my parents for at least few years, maybe even forever.
thank you for your critique.
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well, sometimes one cannot stop from being overly emotional. Go on like this, though^^
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I can feel that too, its so true. But its still good to know that they can hurt us, but not always do
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this is beautiful. I hope you feel better soon, if that is real emotion. If it isn't, then you're amazing.
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actually it is real. and i don't think it will change, but it's ok now that i don't have contact with my parents anymore. i'm glad you like it
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Great work on the emotion here! Really well written.
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thank you. i always try to make my poems pass my emotions... guess sometimes i manage to do it just right
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