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DCLzexon — Rodents of Wrath Resketch WIP
Published: 2011-12-29 09:11:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 668; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 69
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okay, i swear this will be the last rat rage related WIP i uploadafter idk howmany hours of resketching the different characters, im finally happy with the look of all of them
since i have to be knocked out for the next 8 hours due to loss of sleep, im posting this early for some feed back while i still can resketch stuff (spent 3 days sketching and practicing for it, whats a few hours more sketching?)
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I really like the colors on this, pal. Can't wait to see the finished piece.
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MORE RAT RAGE RELATED THINGS then start a comic
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I see that you're pretty set on Rai and trying to draw around that to make it look better when you should look at the composition overall. Not that there's anything major wrong with Rai, aside from his gun hand not really clutching the gun. You might also want to check the foreshortening on his right leg (page left). There's not much to his lower leg below the knee before you get to his foot.
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Rai is the center of the composition, as for the gun that was a stylized choice (i like to play around with the hand poses, you can see that from nini and squeak)
as for the left leg it was ment to be going away from viewing point making it shorter, the fact that you couldnt tell means i need to fix it, thanks for the help
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I could tell that the leg is going back into space, but the position of the foot suggests otherwise. If I had my tablet, I could show you...
Stylistic choice or not, I just feel like that gun could fall out of his hands.
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dont worry bout dat foot, already guessed you would say that and fixed it ;3
and hes so pro his gun defies gravity bro, its all good
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Squeeks head seems too small and there seems to be some dead space on the left.
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planning things for that dead space
as for the head ile see what i can do
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cool. nice to see that your tackling this hard
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Dude you seriously worry too much over nothing.
Art should be fluid.
You do it out of habit, if you're going to stress over the SKETCH, then you'll never be satisfied. No one becomes godly overnight
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the sketch is the most important part though, if the foundation sucks then everything else will look wrong even if it was done amazingly
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I see the sketch as a base, it's what you do AFTERWARDS that matters aka the inking and coloring.
If you stress too much over the sketch, you'll never get a drawing done. I learned that the hard way.
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its okay i normaly dont stress this much over a sketch xD its usualy the line art :I
but i was also using this as my "practice" since i cant stay focused on sketches that i know i wont show to anyone or ever make anything big out of, so in a nut shell this is not only a contest entry, but a practice session
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