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dcwilson — Scrub Off
Published: 2008-05-12 01:24:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 201; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 3
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I washed my face every day.Over and over I scrub.
And after I am foamed in bubbles,
I dunk my head in the tub
I use all sorts of soaps,
With cold water and with hot,
My face may start to peel or blister,
Yet clean? I am not!
My eyes are beginning to burn.
My cheeks are getting sore.
But I’m not happy with the outcome;
I’ll wash it once more.
You’d think I’d be satisfied,
But that is not the case,
I do not like the look of me.
I cannot stand my face.
So once again I dip in,
And lather up anew.
This time I must be better!
One more time will do!
But I look up to my mirror.
And in dismay I scoff;
I could wash my face a thousand times,
But ugly can’t come off.
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I don't know... I'm just still amazed how you got no comments whatsoever 
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Haha, well I moved my gallery so these got at least a little attention when they were uploaded. I don't really mind all that much. These poems are older works.
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x3 I would love to see more. If this old (as it obivously is you wrote the date XD), I bet you've gotten 10times better
PS: D: Do you do request? Or only commisions, or neither?
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For visual art... that really depends. Not at the moment, as I am spending 10 hours a day on painting a childrens' book. If I am hard pressed for money I take commission, if not, I sometimes do requests. It doesn't hurt to throw it out there.
(And I wish I had recent poetry... but I don't write poems anymore for some odd reason.)
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:sad: I lost my poerty talent as well... D: I use to write a ton. Like Story poems... but 3 & 1/2 years and i just can't feel anything.
Well If your ever free I would love to request something. (It's nearly inpossible to find ppl who aren't comissioning.)
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