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Ddzgrl โ€” Because of me
Published: 2007-01-19 02:26:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 133; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 0
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Description Because of me
Dripping red
On hard dark wood
Dark eyes closed for good
The ultimate price
For no good cause
I didn't deserve it
This wasn't the clause
I scorned you
And cursed
Mocked your face
Then slapped you
And 'showed you your place'
I did this to you
Not them!
Just I!
I killed you
So tell me, God
Why
Why did you take it?
The shame and the guilt
You took it all
And your pride did not wilt
Instead you look
At me
With eyes gentle and kind
And smile
Then quietly died
As I stand here
Head bowed in shame
I realize my folly
When I cursed your name
The sound of the slap
That rocked you side to side
The look in your eyes
As you hung there and died
Oh Christ
My Savior, my God
I don't deserve this
I owe you so much, God
So please take my life
And make it all yours
Kill me if you must
But I give it to you
My life is forever
Be rearranged
Never again
Will I curse your name
Your precious blood
In bright scarlet streams
Staining the wood
As you hang there
Because of me
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Comments: 11

Geschi [2007-01-30 16:46:16 +0000 UTC]

How could he do this for us...? Amazing... Iยดm always so sad when i think about it, and how stupid I sometimes act - how much it must hurt him...

very great poem... made me think again (:

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Ddzgrl In reply to Geschi [2007-01-30 23:36:14 +0000 UTC]

*smiles* It's my job to make poeple think. He did it because he loves us, and to show us that he does...truely amazing

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Geschi In reply to Ddzgrl [2007-02-02 13:11:23 +0000 UTC]

Yep, it so is... Thanks again for sharing that!

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Ddzgrl In reply to Geschi [2007-02-03 01:54:24 +0000 UTC]

Very welcome! n.n

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Goodbyesarenevereasy [2007-01-27 16:35:31 +0000 UTC]

Wow... and I sad the last 1 had depth... I like that its so personal..

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Ddzgrl In reply to Goodbyesarenevereasy [2007-01-29 08:36:19 +0000 UTC]

Yeah...personal...very..

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Esqer [2007-01-20 00:28:25 +0000 UTC]

again i must say: very well written.
i like it ^^

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Ddzgrl In reply to Esqer [2007-01-21 04:37:39 +0000 UTC]

^_^ Squee!

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ScreamingFingers [2007-01-19 03:42:38 +0000 UTC]

o_o This is quite a touching poem,sis.

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Ddzgrl In reply to ScreamingFingers [2007-01-19 06:45:38 +0000 UTC]

Thanks...I cried while writing it v.v

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ScreamingFingers In reply to Ddzgrl [2007-01-19 19:08:15 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome.I cried while reading it,It really made me think.

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