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Published: 2007-06-18 19:11:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 364; Favourites: 10; Downloads: 8
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This is the 16000 kiriban for ! >w< she requested Temari XD; <3 I hope it turned out alright.Oh, and sorry for making it fullbody XD now you have to look at all my anatomic mistakes...
Feel free to redline or tell me if anythings wron [please, don't just say: the anatomy isn't right, please say what part, so I can practice XD]
Yup, I'll practice anatomy XD I already did with dog/cat earlier today.. And after I looked at some tutorials, it worked! ^__^
I'll do your kiriban soon too, opal. don't worry >W<
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very aweosme, and he hair looks nice like that.
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Jag ser inga fel... kanske jag inte är så bra på anatomi heller. ._.
Men awwww vad jag älskar den. Tacktacktack. <33
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Varsågod! ^^ glad att du gillade den~~
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I think the anatomy is just fine ^___^ really awsome job!! lovely pic ^___^
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yatta, its temari-chan !!!! ^w^ awesome work sempai !! ^o~
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Thanks! ^___^ ohoh... can I call you hime-chan? 8D or is there anything else I can call you? XD
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sure why not? you could call me little sis or anything you want ! ^w^
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Yay! ^__^ I think I'll stick with hime-chan, tho. Easy to remember XD
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I dont think you should be worrying about your anamtomy, it's really good <3 If I could point out something tho, it would be the neck, it seems a tiny bit to long. not much tho :3 Also, her right foot looks like it's bent to far back, it looks like it would be going into the other foot. I'd redline, but I dont think I'd be able to do a very good job 
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Okay, my friend also pointed out that the neck turned into shoulders to quickly [or whatever you say] and that it woulf have to go smoother XD ah.. something like that..
Yeah, I know.. I can't draw feet. Seriously XD But I do so I atleast practice it...
thank you >w<
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lovely pic
Wha...? anatomic mistakes... naaahh ...
kiriban is some kind of gift >///3///< ... nobody should look sth wrong in it X3
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Thank you! ;w;
O.. Okay.. I just wanted some help because I'm trainging my anatomy now >w< [I'm not finished with practicing hands yet, but..]
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Omg så jättefin <33
Hm, kritik då... Halsen övergår till axlar för hastig och får dem att verka, eh, kantiga? De borde vara lite "mjukare": [link]
Sedan har jag även svårt att se om kroppen ska vara sedd framifrån eller i halvprofil. Benen och vänstra armen säger att det är framifrån, men resten säger halvprofil.
... ok, skjut mig nu. o_<
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Hmm jo, tack! >w< det där med halvprofil/framifrånsak är helt rätt 8DDD ah jag suger på sånt. -fail-
och halsen.. den var egentligen så att den gick över men det försvann när jag la till kläderna XD -ännu mer fail-
-skjuter inte för jag bad ju om kritik- XD
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maaw vad fiint *ww*
inget fel på din anatomi inte :*D du klarar dig mycket bättre än mig kan jag lova c: keep the good work up^
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Tack! >w<
Nä, du är bättre. ^___^
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