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Published: 2005-02-13 16:12:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 5902; Favourites: 214; Downloads: 31
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SuicideTortured, suffering, living in pain
haunted by his past
he writes a letter to his family and friends
and for unknown reasons laughs.
He thought he was alone and uncared for
he heavens a sigh of grief
tears flow freely from his eyes
he seeks to find relief.
Into his room he silently went
is parents not to wake
takes the revolver from his drawer
his hands begin to shake.
A loud noise echoes through the house
his parents run indred
for on the floor with a gun at his side
in a pile of blood their son lay dead.
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Comments: 25
Please don't, stay and work it out. 
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Very, VERY well done, brings up many pictures and memories, this is a very real thing.
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That's such a great poem, and it's on a subject that's close to me. Very well done.
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That's gorgeous. Mind if I use this for a layout? I'll credit it to you of course.
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reminds me of dead poets society... its a really good movie and this is exactly what happens
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I am sorry it is based on a true happening. I hope you learn and grow from the experiance and not do by example.
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That's a fantastic poem, I love it. And yes, I'm real sorry if this was someone you knew...
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entrancing and beautiful but so sad
i'm sorry for your loss
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That's incredibly depressing.
It's well written and therefore very touching.
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Yes it was an unfortunite event... he was a friend of mine and it was hard to deal with at the time but it changed me forever.
thanks for your condolences
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Very sad. I love it. I too am sorry if you knew that person.
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Wow, I love this poem and I'm sorry if you knew this person. Must have been tragic.
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