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DeadNotSleeping5876 — Gumdrop Candy

Published: 2012-12-31 01:13:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 700; Favourites: 33; Downloads: 25
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Description The candy on the Gingerbread house me and my sister made today.

This is also the first picture I am making a critique pic, so if anyone wants to give it a go, go ahead! (Be nice please!)
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Comments: 14

Marrrrissa [2013-05-04 18:17:32 +0000 UTC]

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It's adequate. The perspective does not look original though. It looks more like an angle that someone there with you, maybe your sister, would have guided you to. It also looks like the roof was her design. Who knows.. but I suppose you can see the sugar on the gum drops.. that's artistic. Very colorful, unlike your soul. I sense that sometimes you don't give this other person, your sister, credit for picture set-ups.. I saw that LOTR lego picture with Shelob. That also spoke to me saying, This is more than adequate, her sister must have had the idea and held Shelob in the air for her to be able to get this picture!

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NightWolf7272 In reply to Marrrrissa [2013-05-07 08:00:34 +0000 UTC]

"Very colorful, unlike your soul."
I'm sitting at work trying to read this and at that point I started laughing out loud.
I love you both.

And you should credit Marrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrissa in some descriptions. Or she might just end up eating you in your sleep.

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Marrrrissa In reply to NightWolf7272 [2013-05-07 13:30:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Nicole! Finally someone who understands me!

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NightWolf7272 In reply to Marrrrissa [2013-05-09 15:53:42 +0000 UTC]

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genkae [2012-12-31 01:21:21 +0000 UTC]

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Ack~! It looks so tastey ;] I wish I could eat it~ It looks tastey, colorful, vibrant, and outstanding. Its like a party in a candy way, It's very creative and I haven't really seen these before cause I usually only critique on anime. So it's rare for me to see stuff like this. xD But I just can't help myself but so laugh every time I see it for some reason :3 But yet still, I do indeed like it alot. Especially the nice vibrance and arrangement of the colors~ Very beautiful indeed and yet very tastey too. Great job ;D

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DeadNotSleeping5876 In reply to genkae [2012-12-31 01:34:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for taking your time to review it! I appreciate your opinion very much!

I will find it hard to eat since it is so colorful and decorated

You are also my first critique ever, so thank you!

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genkae In reply to DeadNotSleeping5876 [2012-12-31 02:17:34 +0000 UTC]

Aww~, Your welcome c: If I were you, just take alot of pictures of it then! X3 Then it may not be so hard because you atleast have pictures of it still~~~

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DeadNotSleeping5876 In reply to genkae [2012-12-31 05:02:36 +0000 UTC]

I think I'll do that! Good idea!

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genkae In reply to DeadNotSleeping5876 [2012-12-31 05:04:09 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ;D~~~~

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myccrets [2013-01-04 17:41:41 +0000 UTC]

Is it wrong that I want to eat my screen right now???

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DeadNotSleeping5876 In reply to myccrets [2013-01-04 21:59:33 +0000 UTC]

That's perfect! The outcome I was going for

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cyimang [2012-12-31 01:47:48 +0000 UTC]

Awww... Looks so good!!! Awesome and lovely shot

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DeadNotSleeping5876 In reply to cyimang [2012-12-31 05:03:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!! I appreciate it!

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cyimang In reply to DeadNotSleeping5876 [2012-12-31 07:05:26 +0000 UTC]

You are very welcome!!

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