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DeadThings — the last time verse
Published: 2004-04-29 12:25:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 2994; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 126
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---------------------------------------- ------------------------------The last time verse
What did they do to you, my heart?
You were just fine last time I checked
Not long ago, things were alright
I guess I made a big mistake
The blame is just on me to take
I know the fault is only mine...
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Comments: 22
is that you there?
and the words really do complement the feelings from the picture
of not knowing what to do now?
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Yep it's me on the "beach"
Should stop giving away all my tips!
Thank you very much- I was afraid that the words didn't make much sense.
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I like the feeling I recognize in the picture. The lines under it complete it so well...
just have to 
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Thank you, thank you so much... for liking the poem as well as the picture. i'm glad it appears to ring a familiar bell in you.
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Pouvoir regarder son coeur en face, lui parler
Pouvoir s'en détacher et ainsi penser sans lui...
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Parler à son coeur oui, mais ce n'est qu'un pretexte pour dire ces choses à quelqu'un d'autre, c'est ironique, en somme.
Se detacher de son coeur? Penser sans lui??
Pour une seance photo, peut-etre, mais pas dans la vraie vie.
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Le temps passe,
Les gens changent,
Les idées évoluent,
Les pensées prennent forme, voir IMAGE...
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tU dis des choses bien vraies.
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Pour une scéance photo, ou pour un boulot, surtout le tiens (enfin ex boulot) !
PArfois, tu veux donner l'impression d'une femme sans coeur qui te jette sa théorie de l'amour qui ne marche pas dans la pratique (et oui, le coeur, on ne s'en détache pas comme ça!)
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Une infirmiere sans coeur... ben vla qui devrait bien marcher tiens (:rolleyes
C du passé ce que tu decris la.
C tout fini.
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ah, i agree with rockisdead, it's hard to describe my love for this piece... i know for sure, though, that i really like the water and the reflection. very peaceful, against the rocky beach with sharp shadows. very smart!
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well, this is no beach it's a trick
You described very well though your love for this piece! Maybe the landscape thingie?
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not a beach?! *gasp* a trick?!! how could you?! ... 
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well, it is the side of a river... The water was muddy and the "sand" briwn and the sky grey. I messed up the colors in photoshop, and, you can see the result.
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i likes...i can't exactly place why, but i do....
dw
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Well, I would surely be pleased if you could tell why, but the fact only that you likes pleases me allright!
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i like the light on the water...and the sort of darkness near the bottom of the pic and caused by the shadow...
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Thank you.. thank you... thank you... i know i'm needy, commentaryly-speaking.
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wondering why... on a couple of levels..
and yes the picture is very good
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And you're spoiled on the series already... You've seen a bunch of them.
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still wondering why u don't answer ur msn 
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