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DearPoetry — NaPoWriMo: Day 4 by-nc-nd
Published: 2013-04-05 01:42:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 2319; Favourites: 91; Downloads: 50
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Description I might have a scrappers knees,
wildflowers growing on my knuckles,
& I might remind you of every nasty thing
you ever did,
but I don’t see you in my mirror.

I just have the right
to hate my own face.

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Oh atlas,
I think this hitchhiker’s heart
is breaking &
I don’t have the medical skill-
or the time
to suture the pieces
back together again.

So please;

lead me,
lead me
anywhere,
but here.
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Comments: 12

tiajones [2013-06-07 01:19:32 +0000 UTC]

i really like those first four lines

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DearPoetry In reply to tiajones [2013-06-07 12:33:37 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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lupus-astra [2013-04-05 16:02:05 +0000 UTC]

I'm a bit perplexed about the "scrappers knee" bit...

But otherwise, as always, this is purely lovely.

"I just have the right
to hate my own face."

Oh, boy. Do I ever feel you on that.

It'd be so much healthier (?) to hate others, but it's just so damn easy to hate myself instead.

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DearPoetry In reply to lupus-astra [2013-04-05 17:04:56 +0000 UTC]

"scrappers knee's" is basically implying a fighter. Someone who falls down and gets back up.

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oviedomedina [2013-04-05 02:42:56 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful as always!

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DearPoetry In reply to oviedomedina [2013-05-31 16:31:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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LightningIdle [2013-04-05 02:40:18 +0000 UTC]

You have an incredible talent for putting words together, and I'm always impressed with your work.

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DearPoetry In reply to LightningIdle [2013-05-31 16:31:33 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Angelalala923 [2013-04-05 02:18:36 +0000 UTC]

Hehe-I've written a poem with those same last two lines

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DearPoetry In reply to Angelalala923 [2013-05-31 16:31:44 +0000 UTC]

Aww, really?

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littlemoonboots [2013-04-05 02:03:34 +0000 UTC]

beautiful, as always. your diction & imagery is absolutely incredible.
best of luck for poetry month!

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DearPoetry In reply to littlemoonboots [2013-05-31 16:31:54 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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