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Published: 2013-06-15 00:16:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 9071; Favourites: 634; Downloads: 23
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donβt make mefall in love with you,
again.
I donβt want to remember you,
those Sunday morning
wake-me-up kisses,
or the way your
lost boy eyes always,
always found a way
to find mine.
There are only so many times
I can allow you to slice
through my scar tissue
before I finally
fall
ap art.
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I don't find the need to write long piece. Tell me, would you really bother reading something that was just too long? But you are right, I could most definitely expand on this piece.
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Wow. This is truly moving even with such a small amount of words!
This piece really resonated with me, what with just breaking up with a boyfriend of mine that I had been with for eight months. It stirred up all those emotions I was repressing, and made me realize that the inevitable is unavoidable and that pain is a bit beautiful, even in its complexity.
Having such a deep connection to your work here, I can only hope that both of us find healing. If the strong emotion your work portrays is truly the way you feel, I hope you feel better.
The impact was huge, the message was timeless, and I enjoyed this more than words could say.
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I know what you mean... 
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I read the last line as AP Art
Love the poem though
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This is achingly beautiful in it's truth <3 Reading this also made me realize just how much I feel the same way quite a lot, so I feel for you.
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Thank you! And I'm sorry, it's not a very good feeling.
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Your welcome ^ Β ^Β
and indeed.
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Yes, I know what you mean exactly.
Thank you, and keep on writing. ;u;
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You're welcome. And I will.
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Good. I can't wait to see more of your works.
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I know exactly how this is. It is best to move on. 
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this was gorgeous. i'm very glad i came upon it.
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Powerful and desperate sounding. I really felt the sincerity in the pleading. Also it was a nice touch, splitting the word 'apart' to embody its meaning.
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This piece is absolutely fantastic. Definitely hits right in the feels.
As a side note, keep your head up. You'll get through this in time, but it's awfully hard to keep moving forward with your head down and looking the ground.
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oh now I get the apart part because the word itself is falling apart...
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Huh? I still don't get it... Ooooooooh. Okay I get it. What might be better, though, is to break up the word "falling" too, so that it doesn't just look like a typo.
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yeah like literally make it falling down
f
a
l
l
i
n
g
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Yeah. Or maybe even just break it into two or three parts on the same line, just to establish the pattern. Although I do like your falling idea.
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Through your writing you'll be able to heal. Trust me. (a complete stranger on the internet, but I've gone through this)
This is a really beautiful poem.
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Not my secret.
But thank you.
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It's a great poetry,found myself in those lines and even I couldn't describe it better 
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This poem described the issue I'm in. I'm so tore apart that letting someone new in scares me
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You will find that right person to let in. C:
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I hope so, its a pain in the butt feeling like this.
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This is the story of my best friend's life
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I love this so much, you're an amazing writer
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Wow, great impact with so few words. Really well done.
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Oooooh, you need a cyber hug. ^_^
It hurts, I know, but when it goes right, it's worth it. Trust me.
Lovely poetry! reminds me of the Jewel song-
Please, don't, stand so cloooooose please don't make me~ Fall in love with you again~
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Sorry, but this isn't my secret. Just my words.
But thank you, and I've never heard that song.
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I know, but someone'll nose by and see that comment. ^_^
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