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Published: 2009-01-23 12:11:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 1657; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 14
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Description This is what happens to some Linions that get shipwrecked in Rhendosia and captured by Karee. The Karee will try to break them in for riding. A karee can get a loooot of respect for achieving this because it is notoriously hard. This female is trying her hand at it with a huge Male linion that she fancied she could cow and break to her will with a few whips.

She sorely underestimated his staying power. I dont think she'll succeed frankly, but that may be a bad thing for the Linion...

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Comments: 11

Deezmo [2009-01-25 00:50:26 +0000 UTC]

Nice story, poor linion :c

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sindos [2009-01-23 17:42:04 +0000 UTC]

Poor thing!
Hey, I am wondering, do the speak different languages? well being sentient races that develop civilizations... I think is awful what the Karee is doing, specially if they are able to understand each other, I guess is kind of the time of slavery right? :/

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Deathcomes4u In reply to sindos [2009-01-24 06:14:44 +0000 UTC]

yes Linions have a language. Karee refuse to believe anything with fur is intelligent enough to really speak like they can. To them its all random chatter that Linions make. Karee have a hiss based language (yes its like parseltounge, except i came up with it before i read Harry Potter and got pissed when i read the second book ) and Linions just cant pick it up, cause the Karee isolate them in a way that they aren't exposed to a means of learning the Karee language. But yea, Karee have this inbuilt loathing and distain fro anything with hair or fur. They wouldn't be as adverse to humans, because they'd just go 'well you're mostly hairless-ish, at least you're trying'

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sindos In reply to Deathcomes4u [2009-01-24 06:36:33 +0000 UTC]

Don't worry as I just read two harry books, and I am no fan. Yours is better x) (myths and Lachlin)
I love how you have everything worked out

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Deathcomes4u In reply to sindos [2009-01-24 13:27:59 +0000 UTC]

D: but ive been in the fandom for 8 years, i hate that she got to hissy language before me, but i still love the books
Glad you like my stuff tho ^.^ yea, i have too much free brain time on my hands, i just sit there thinking up this random shit and fitting it together like a puzzle

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Rurouna [2009-01-23 17:32:46 +0000 UTC]

Gosh this is amazing, the emotion. x_X I hope that Linion doesn't give up, he's such a beauty!

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Deathcomes4u In reply to Rurouna [2009-01-24 06:15:11 +0000 UTC]

If he doesn;t give in, they may just kill him though D:

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Rurouna In reply to Deathcomes4u [2009-01-24 06:20:34 +0000 UTC]

NUUU T_T
COLTON SHALL SAVE HIM!

Colton: 'Wha? o-o???'

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Moongara [2009-01-23 16:26:54 +0000 UTC]

I hope the linion bites her. Great piece, any chance of a colored version?

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Deathcomes4u In reply to Moongara [2009-01-24 06:15:30 +0000 UTC]

nah, im too lazy to colour but glad you like it

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Catolf [2009-01-23 15:39:59 +0000 UTC]

that poor Linion.... Though I find his determination to not be broken admirable.

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