Comments: 8
homestucker42 [2013-05-23 13:15:00 +0000 UTC]
I enjoyed it a lot, especially the last line.
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Vanadium789 [2013-04-02 04:54:20 +0000 UTC]
Really wonderful poem. It's the first one that's caught my attention since rejoining the site. Very beautifully written.
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scotchKing [2013-02-11 05:52:46 +0000 UTC]
That's Beautiful!
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VeriFast [2012-05-31 08:45:33 +0000 UTC]
If the sun, the birds, the trees, should write about this awesomeness,
Don't you think we frame ourselves? a Little more, or little less?
I saw you wrote, of sun, the trees, the birds, the bees and fireflies.
Can't you see that you can see all that with only two your eyes?
All the beauty in the world, is in you! Don't let it GO!
CAUSE THERE IS NO DESTINY! ONLY THINKING MAKES IT SO!
Ok i love the poem its so fuckin awesome. i wish you all the luck in the world xD
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NekoWolf95 [2012-03-28 17:54:55 +0000 UTC]
Wonderful! I absolutely love this, especially how the imagery paints the picture and then there's also some personification ^^ Excellent job~
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