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Published: 2012-03-28 08:15:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 1409; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 8
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Description The trees write poems of the beautiful green
leaves.
The leaves tell the story of the early spring
breeze.
The sun tells the story of the flowers that
grow.
The flowers write a poem about the sun's
mighty glow.

The stream tells a tale of the rocks and the
fish.
While a lone standing well harbors a wish.
The willow writes of shadows that dance
in the day.
Till the moon starts to rise and they all run
away.

The birds and the bee's will write of their
flight.
The wind writes the breeze that makes them
so light.
The frogs sing a song as the moon starts to
rise.
The fireflies will dance as they light up the
skies.
The owl cries as the stars start to
shine.

We copy what we see as the earth starts to
show it.
Maybe we hold the quill but destiny is the poet.
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Comments: 8

homestucker42 [2013-05-23 13:15:00 +0000 UTC]

I enjoyed it a lot, especially the last line.

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Vanadium789 [2013-04-02 04:54:20 +0000 UTC]

Really wonderful poem. It's the first one that's caught my attention since rejoining the site. Very beautifully written.

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scotchKing [2013-02-11 05:52:46 +0000 UTC]

That's Beautiful!

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Arraveci [2012-10-09 07:32:45 +0000 UTC]

Wooowww That's awesome! NekoWolf95 said it perfectly, the imagery is fantastic, I almost feel like I'm in a forest full of life.

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VeriFast [2012-05-31 08:45:33 +0000 UTC]

If the sun, the birds, the trees, should write about this awesomeness,
Don't you think we frame ourselves? a Little more, or little less?

I saw you wrote, of sun, the trees, the birds, the bees and fireflies.
Can't you see that you can see all that with only two your eyes?

All the beauty in the world, is in you! Don't let it GO!
CAUSE THERE IS NO DESTINY! ONLY THINKING MAKES IT SO!




Ok i love the poem its so fuckin awesome. i wish you all the luck in the world xD

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NekoWolf95 [2012-03-28 17:54:55 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful! I absolutely love this, especially how the imagery paints the picture and then there's also some personification ^^ Excellent job~

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DeathTheKid66 In reply to NekoWolf95 [2012-03-28 19:22:11 +0000 UTC]

Thanks xD I'm glad you love it

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NekoWolf95 In reply to DeathTheKid66 [2012-03-28 22:15:22 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome xD But of course!

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