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Published: 2014-11-28 08:35:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 1041; Favourites: 46; Downloads: 26
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SPEEDPAINT: www.youtube.com/watch?v=8q5J41… ;wooh I'm a little late I hit 3000+ while I was editing the video lmoa welp to late, but no seriously guys thank you so much for the watches follows subs etc. it means the world to me that some people care enough to look at my art every now and again and acknowledge my presence. Thanks for sticking with me.
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I really like how you've done this! It's very well done and I have to say, the originality was very good and the technique was beautiful.
The impact was very cool and worth a whole lot of good words.
The vision is very clear and I love all the colors that you used in this piece of artwork~! It made it even more beautiful and colorful than I thought that it would be.
You also have a very good art style and and I love it. It shows how much time you spend making something that you love to do~!
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ah thank you! I'm glad you like all of the colors I threw in there u vu I'm really glad you like my style! I've been trying to develop it for a long time and it's nice to hear some appreciation of it ; v;
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Honestly I don't know how you got to be able to do something like that but you are very good at what you do.
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Sorry for the late critiquee! ; u ;
Hi there! Thanks for asking me to critique this a while ago! You needed some help with anatomy, and I am honestly not the best but I will help any way I can!
First of all, super cute picture, I love the shading, expression and this is such a nice piece because it seems so personal <3
Overall, I think the anatomy is okay since I figure it's cartoony and in your own style, etc etc. The back leg however, the lower part of the leg shouldn't bend that way, since there are bones there. Like this picture! (assuming your character is a dog ;o; ) www.animalcorner.co.uk/pets/do…
The lower half of the leg can't bend, but if you want an expressive pose like the one you made, I think you can move the upper part of the leg down, so it's protruding more? Picture example: puu.sh/dKts0/6fa2f98453.jpg ( Copy and paste it, I dont think dA lets you click on it. )
I think the body should be longer as well, your characters left arm is also a bit awkward. It's bent weirdly and is generally awkward anatomy with the paw fingers as well. This should help with general anatomy and how the forepaws bends since I can't explain it myself ; u ; fc03.deviantart.net/fs71/f/201…
I think that's really it! I suggest asking others as well to see their input, and most importantly (for yourself), you should look up anatomy works, or.. my personal favorite, search up dog videos and watch them run, play and roll around. You should be able to figure out anatomy more and enjoy a video as well c: Hope this helps!!
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ah thank you so much! I appreciate your feedback although it's late, it's close to the holiday season so I don't blame you at all u vu my character is a cat actually! But I could understand the misconception, and I will be sure to follow your advice, thanks much!!
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Ah sorry! I guess I could say make the face and maybe paws to look more similar to a cat ;o; sorry for the mistake!
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it's quite alright! I make the same mistake all the time xD
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I have watched the speedpaint multiple times before I saw it on Deviantart. It made me so happy to see that someone works so hard to make something for their watchers just to say thank you. Thank you.
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thanks! this piece is very old though so please i encourage you to check out my newer work as well!
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omg, I really like your name then hun <33 o vo
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//pokes head in to see the party//
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The leg is curved.
//exits backward through window//
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yeah ik but it didn't look fluent enough if I just left it sticking out so I just gave it a slight curve because cat paws can do that somewhat when they're walking.
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omg dat pose. I don't think I've ever seen Ally looking this freakin' cute. Her expression is adorable, I literally want to cuddle that kitty. <3 It's been an amazing time getting to know you, Trin, and watching your artwork mature.
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aahhhhH~ <333 thank you so much mechy it's been great having you stick along for the ride
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