Tomomi24 [2015-09-30 04:21:37 +0000 UTC]
You made quite a few spelling mistakes, but apart from that I enjoyed reading it 😊
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Tomomi24 [2015-03-21 12:34:44 +0000 UTC]
I like this story, but there are a lot of miss spells or words that aren't there that should be there or the other way round, but I still like it
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