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Published: 2009-09-21 22:54:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 818; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 22
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Description 52:: Deep in Thought

Initially, this was a poem. No, I take that back. Initially, this is a true event, this actually happens all the time. Then Spanish became unbarably boring. I've more or less caught up, in case you were wondering.

Here's the poem:


sometimes I want to reach behind me
and grab it.
a black silk cloth.
and i do.
i pull it over my eyes,
my chin,
and it falls down past my toes.
it is the pefect temperature there.
but dark.
all i can see is in front of me,
lit up like a neon light.
ribs, glowing like rust in the
nothing.
and a beautiful beating heart.
so alive, it sings.
so alive
i see its hopes and dreams and wishes,
its loves, its cares, its preferences.
its fears, its anger, its hate,
pulsing with fire.
words like
flight
fright
fight
run throught my head.
then i recognize it.
they're my wants. my dislikes.
my heart.
in the pitch black.
in the black silk cloth.
over my eyes.

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The drawings are from Google images.

Thanks to the above for the wonderful stock. This is not to be posted anywhere under any name but my own. I would greatly appreciate favorites, comments, etc. Enjoy, everyone! [c] 2009 ~DEFYxxNORMALITY
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Comments: 16

serenae-fantasybird [2009-09-23 23:16:30 +0000 UTC]

Wow, the poem is AMAZING! And the picture is really disturbing in a good way--it makes you stop and look carefully, and then think about it. The whole thing is so... powerful. Wow.

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DEFYxxNORMALITY In reply to serenae-fantasybird [2009-09-24 20:54:15 +0000 UTC]

thank you! I keep wishing I could request critiques, but who needs them when you have siri?

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serenae-fantasybird In reply to DEFYxxNORMALITY [2009-09-25 20:25:14 +0000 UTC]

Aw, shucks... *blushes*

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mishkuu [2009-09-22 11:42:06 +0000 UTC]

love the poem and the artwork! glad my stock was helpful keep up the great work!

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DEFYxxNORMALITY In reply to mishkuu [2009-09-22 20:28:29 +0000 UTC]

thanks very much!

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mistress-anagram [2009-09-22 02:08:21 +0000 UTC]

GRAAAGGHH THE POEM IS AMAZING!

... is it just me or is the best stuff written during school? science is the best, for me. xD

gorgeous job as usual!

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DEFYxxNORMALITY In reply to mistress-anagram [2009-09-22 20:30:42 +0000 UTC]

thank you! its true. i often have that daydream. the other one is I imagine reaching up and grabbing sorta like a tube of cloth and bringing down, and as soon as it passes over anything I don't like about myself, it changes to exactly the way I want it, so that when the cloth is all the way down, i feel perfect, but like i'm floating in nothing. really strange.

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mistress-anagram In reply to DEFYxxNORMALITY [2009-09-22 21:20:47 +0000 UTC]

-_- i wish i had imaginitive daydreams. mine are more like:

"... oh look a fish! riding on a mango! ... food..."

xDDDD

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DEFYxxNORMALITY In reply to mistress-anagram [2009-09-22 21:26:22 +0000 UTC]

that is what we call "one-track-mind" x]
what theme d'ya think i should do next?
gah! anne frank auditions tomorrow! its between me n zoe. zoe gets points for actually being jewish. hopefully im a better actress. maybe i get points for being immature, like anne x]

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mistress-anagram In reply to DEFYxxNORMALITY [2009-09-23 00:04:45 +0000 UTC]

ahhhahaha. you'll get points for PRETENDING to be jewish the best. she'll actually be jewish, but you'll PLAY being jewish better. xD

hmmm... theme... i dunno. xD but make a playlist!

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DEFYxxNORMALITY In reply to mistress-anagram [2009-09-23 22:31:40 +0000 UTC]

guesswhatguesswhatguesswhat!!!!
I GOT A CALLBACK! THEY HAD ME READ ANNE'S LINES!!!! heheheheh...
fagin from last year read meh daddy's lines.
results tomorrow!

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mistress-anagram In reply to DEFYxxNORMALITY [2009-09-23 23:03:09 +0000 UTC]

-does crazy anna-win- dance-

go, anna go! go, anna go! you BE jewish! that's what im talking about!

8D okay so im hyper.

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DEFYxxNORMALITY In reply to mistress-anagram [2009-09-24 20:54:30 +0000 UTC]

no shit! call me when you get home please!

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mistress-anagram In reply to DEFYxxNORMALITY [2009-09-25 01:36:22 +0000 UTC]

i didsers, but then i couldn't call again bc of too much homework... TT-TT

lo siento, mi amor.

... is it strange that i have an irrational fear of mr. watters?

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DEFYxxNORMALITY In reply to mistress-anagram [2009-09-25 22:19:48 +0000 UTC]

...um...yes?

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mistress-anagram In reply to DEFYxxNORMALITY [2009-09-26 00:47:17 +0000 UTC]

-_-

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