Comments: 24
xSxDxObsessionx [2009-01-10 02:03:33 +0000 UTC]
This is really good. The description of the fight scene, in particular, was pretty damn cool.
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Kaoru-Yuki [2009-01-08 01:28:29 +0000 UTC]
it's good ^^
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deidarasfangirl416 [2009-01-07 23:10:44 +0000 UTC]
truly amazing, you made a fight sound beautiful, like it was art
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deidarasfangirl416 In reply to deidarasgirl17 [2009-01-08 00:41:56 +0000 UTC]
i thought it was kinda obvious, but in that suttle kind of way, if that makes any kind of sence
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lyonsc313 [2009-01-07 21:37:57 +0000 UTC]
its awesome! amazing! keep going XD
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lyonsc313 In reply to deidarasgirl17 [2009-01-08 11:02:24 +0000 UTC]
aww suckages T_T
ah well tis awesome tho
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1Ivanessence1 [2009-01-07 19:54:57 +0000 UTC]
very good!!!!! ^^ odd clothing... but still fantastic!
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deidarasgirl17 In reply to 1Ivanessence1 [2009-01-07 22:15:02 +0000 UTC]
not my picture, but thats the idea i got from the picture
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GeettaKiho89 [2009-01-07 19:49:02 +0000 UTC]
awesome!! I sooo wanna read more!!!
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IchigoMalfoy [2009-01-07 18:16:10 +0000 UTC]
It's awesome!!!!! i even had to save the pic for myself, bt the story was G-R-E-A-T!!!!!! i saw a few mistakes, like spelling and grammar (i don't even think i spelled that right), but it was still great eitehr way. ^^
oh, and FIRST COMMENT!!!!!
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deidarasgirl17 In reply to IchigoMalfoy [2009-01-07 22:17:18 +0000 UTC]
-^^- thanks!
yes my grammer is not that of my age, but levels lower sadily
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IchigoMalfoy In reply to deidarasgirl17 [2009-01-08 04:25:38 +0000 UTC]
meh, that ok, i could help you edit if you wanted me to.....just saying if you wanted me to not that you have to but ifyou want me to then i can...^^
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deidarasgirl17 In reply to IchigoMalfoy [2009-01-08 12:56:34 +0000 UTC]
alright then! -^^-
im actully looking into a beat reader right now but in till she says yes im left alone with my grammer mistakes >.<
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IchigoMalfoy In reply to deidarasgirl17 [2009-01-08 22:41:25 +0000 UTC]
Cool! I'm good at fixing grammar...most times. sometimes for my work i have to read through it about 5 times before i catch all the mistakes, but i get 'em!! ^^
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deidarasgirl17 In reply to IchigoMalfoy [2009-01-09 01:53:59 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! -^^-
ill be sure to give you a ring when i need some help!!!
(right ish buried with school junk)
if my beta reader doesnt accept then i WILL need help >>
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