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Published: 2017-08-28 16:14:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 7418; Favourites: 270; Downloads: 0
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Song = THEY - U-RITE (Rynx Remix)EDIT: Added flying glass, the Rynx Logo, and added more RED/BLUE 3D EFFECTS (3D Glasses advised!)
Also I was INSPIRED by appleminer 's pic Here Β to do this so.. go check it out! xD
IM SO PROUD OF THIS AA
seriously this song is so goodΒ
Tried a 3D-ish effect on Vanoss, not sure how I like it but it looks better than what i had before
also realized that I made Vanoss almost look like his logo and my mind was blown at how similar it looks like wow
also I seriously want to see some feedback on this since I spent 3 days on it, and its one of my favorite pieces right now ;w;
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Comments: 35
Needless to say, this artwork is very eye-catching. The inclusion of the glass and the textures in the background make the center character (Vanoss) pop out much more. It also helps that Vanoss and the 3D effect is the only source of color besides black and white, which amplifies its noticeability.
I like how you made the 3D effect slight on Vanoss's character and increased it on the glass. That gives it a sense of perspective, making it seem like Vanoss is in the middle while the glass is more in the foreground.
The way you shaded his skin, white feathers, and ears (yes, apparently those eyebrows/tufts on a great-horned owl's head are called ears even though they aren't actual ears) seem to be much more detailed in contrast to the suit and rest of Vanoss's head. Some more shading around the arm would make it stand out as closer towards the screen and amplify the illusion of perspective.
The white glow around him was a good choice as it makes him stand out against the black and white background. The light emitting from his headphones is also a nice touch, and I see you took the icon's position into account when you made one-half appear on one side and the second on the other.
I appreciate how you stylized the mask to resemble his icon yet also bare some traits of the GTA 5 mask, which started it all, such as the subtle detail of the black feathers outlining the white eye-feathers near the top. That's a detail most artists don't even notice on that mask.
I like the fact that you made sure the white eye-feathers and eyebrows/ears had golden highlights due to the fact that his eyes were glowing gold. In some areas, the yellow and gold turn to a darker orange, like on the straps and near the top of his head. While that kind of shading works with straps and other fabric, it makes the head and feathers look a little flat near the top.
I would suggest in the future when you have such elegant and detailed shading for the rest of the character, try adding some more feathers between his eyes and where his eyebrows/ears spread apart to branch off, and making the golden highlights more prominent as they get closer to the eyes like how you did with the eyebrows/ears and face-feathers.
The hand is mostly accurate anatomy-wise. I like how you make it so his index finger was partially hidden behind the headphones. However, that dark streak contradicts the idea of the headphones glowing. Also, the index and middle finger are so close together you have to zoom in a great deal in order to see that there is another finger there at all. I would make the index finger brighter than the middle finger and move it closer towards Vanoss's head, that would also give a better visual of Vanoss "cradling" it as most people tend to do.
The pinky finger is a little too thick in contrast to the ring finger, and the position of the ring finger makes it seem the pinky is also longer. I can see the ring finger is bent and is actually longer, so it was a trick of positioning. However, I could only see that after zooming in quite a bit.
You could use the glow of the headphones to your advantage and give the fingers a white highlight, including where the fingers are bent so they stand out against the black glove.
The shading of the glass and metal clasp (on the strap) is very realistic and seem like actual glass and metal. I like the glow of the white features in the background as well, however, the audio wave of ovals is slightly overwhelming. It feels like it's flooding the black space that helps make Vanoss pop. I would make that audio wave slightly transparent, not by much, but just enough to give more of a sense of darkness and contrast.
The eyes are very well done, the only thing I would suggest is giving the dark eyelashes (for lack of a better term) a more feathery effect like how you did with the white feathers. Also, I would make the pupils larger so they are more owl-like, but not by much. The shading of said pupils is outstanding, and appear very alive.
You should feel proud of this work, I found it very enjoyable to look over and critique. The mistakes I pointed out were mostly minor, and overall I think it's an outstanding piece of artwork. I would just keep these things in mind when drawing something else, and I hope to see more from you in the future!
^.^
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This is so cool! It makes it more alive! Keep it up!
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Thanks!! ;w;
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SO. COOL. HOW. THIS IS AB. SO. LU. TE. LY. AMAZINGΒ
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This is amazing!!!
:0 way better then I could do... I mean daaaamn look at this... Fudging awesome!
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When you put it like that like that like that
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The vannoss radio playing- U-Rite Remix.
This looks awesome shiz.
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STOP, YOURE GOING TO MAKE ME WATCH HIM 50 TIMES A DAY.
This is really good holy shit.
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I already do >:3
thanks though omgg
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This looks f#cking awesome and the music too, got stuck on my head
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Woah thats frikking awesome! Vanoss needs to see this woah
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