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Published: 2015-08-06 23:56:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 17213; Favourites: 191; Downloads: 61
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idk what to say man i think i'm actively avoiding any and everything pertaining to school starting again so i throw myself into drawing??
AUTHOR NOTES:
- if you're following the nuzblog on tumblr, you might have already expected this as it's been mentioned before. Basically, fire types can produce an oily substance all over their body at will for fire to catch on-- skin isn't very flammable, so. While he was wrapping the whip all about his hands and arms, he was spreading as much as he could on it so it would light too quickly for Yana to react.
- sorry this one has a lot of text, i should have broken it up better u u;;;;;;
- yana will still be seen at a later date...
- I wonder how Tiv feels about the slip up by Makoto. And if she'll continue to travel with them.
- wow this page is short as hell
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OOOH HERE COMES THE SPECIAL POWER STUFF IM HERE FOR IT
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Pssst, the Next button doesn't have a link on this one. uvu
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oh thank you! i guess i forgot to edit it OTL
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have i ever told how much i love this nuzlock?
cuz i ABSOLUTELY ADORE IT Β Β
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little question, will you be answering the phenomenon of Makoto able to sync with more than 1 pokemonΒ partner sooner or later? Β I'm just as curious as them, since the question was presented.
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it's brought up sooner, but will be gradually explained throughout the comic until the final pieces fall together probably later (or that's how it's planned anyway)!
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ohhh ok, looking forward to it :3
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you know what's funny? yesterday i found my old Gameboy and gamesΒ and realized i'v always called my charmander's Elli, weird right? i have loved always loved the name Elli, and i think that was one of the things that drew me into this story! i love this, hope you continue!
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that's so weird, but I also (obviously)I've the name too! and thank you, I will definitely be continuing as soon as I can, I haven't had tons of time recently to work on it. but, the next page is almost done!
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omg you responded! was not expecting that XD and your welcome! and take your time, you can't rush perfection! but i am excited!
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thank you so much!
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Just found this amaaaazing story. Cannot wait to see what happens next and wonder if the gym leaders will get involved at one.
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Short, but the faces in the last two panels are golden XDXDXD
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I hope Tiv will stay, also I'm really curious about everything.Β
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You're style is so preeeettyyyyyyyyyyy. Everyone always looks so amazing and gorgeous!
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I wonder what Makoto will feel when someone dies...?Β
>;D
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Haha, I love Gary. But no! I don't want Tiv to leave!
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"...It just doesn't work like that."
Or does it? >:3
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That author note scares me. Nooooo Tiv babby don't leave meeee
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I just love Gary's personality in this 'locke!
And oh, snap: is that foreshadowing I smell?
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I like this format, it's probably easier on you too, isn't it?
Now as too this "synching" thing, I wonder: if either Tiv or Elli wore to get a cut would Makoto just share their pain, or would HE get a cut too?
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If Tiv's injury is anything to go by, it seems that Makoto only shares the pain, as his hand seems to be okay.
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Sometimes silence speaks volumes, I love those last two panels!
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lol and in third gen Double Battles were unleashed unto the world.
Seriously Deja, I saw the update on Tumblr and just stared at it for a second thinking holy shit girl you work fast.
From one procrastinator to another, way to go!!!
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oh wow this was up fast! :0
im liking the shading in this one its v clean + the rock wall bg is solid too! ndΒ the foreshadowing and plot thickening is great so far
brock is looking..... especially GoodΒ in this update.... ;'^)
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The unspoken "OR IS IT?" is glorious.
never mind a crap ton of foreshadowing all throughout up to this point.
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Surprise update got me good!
Makoto is now a universal love donor it's headcanon now. The ships are all canon. Forever.
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Damn Deja, that's some foreshadowing there. I'm now worried about Makoto. Hope he'll be fine at the end of run.
Aside from that, I love your coloring for this new update. It looks bright and colorful! Nice job!
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DUM DUM DUUUUUUUUUUUUUM. Β \o/ Β YES TO PLOT SET-UP. Β YESSSSSSSSS.
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"Riddle me this, riddle me that" I must know!
Story is really fun and interesting.
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Is that why Makoto looked, well, pained for the entire battle...?
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Them poor hands. I've never broken anything in my hands, but I have screwed it up so much that I couldn't move it (never EVER try and draw constantly for a contest for literally two days)
TEXT IS OKAY MY DEAR TEXT MEANS LOVELY INFORMATION
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Ohoho I really, really love all the effort you've put in for your own theories and headcanons for this, it's absolutely wonderful and makes it fun to read. <3
Don't worry about the short pages tho bby, sometimes those are nice for the more laid back plot explanation kinda things. Does that even make sense omg. I really can't wait to see how Tiv will react to things aaa.
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So you finished it! good job! you know you should do more streams
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short pages are fine 
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l;sdk'gopermgl;d'flgkerlkfld;sgkroep'gkflg@@@@@!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOJHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! I like your descriptive style with the fighting, not just move-go-move-go.Β
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Good page but why did her harm hurt after the battle?
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she was burnt by elli's ember in the previous page.
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So they were both in sync with their trainer? So like when the Elli put flames on his hand trainer felt it as well, that's why he was sweating right? Also the Mankey must've felt it but to a greater degree after the battle? Is that how it is?
Or perhaps it has something to do with the trainers emotions.
(Sorry I've forgotten everyone's name's T_T)
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not necessarily every sensation is shared by the trainer and gijinka-- mostly just pain. To better explain it, when not synced, all pain is centralized in the place the injury or wound is, like a regular human being (to a lesser extent due to gijinkas having a higher pain tolerance overall). When synced, imagine instead of feeling a sharp pain in one area, feeling a slight exhaustion over the whole body. that's all I'll say for now, since this will all be explained further in another update!
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hmm...I think I get what you mean. So the bit why "Mankey" started feeling pain in her hand when "Other Trainer" came into the gym will be explained as well?
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ohhh, still doesn't explain why she didn't feel it until after the battle. Wait, I got burnt while setting up at work once, the pan fell half way into the really hot water and it splashed on my arm, I bore with it for the day but it hurt like crap. So delayed reaction?
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