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let go
don't go
let go don't go
let go let go let go
please just go
make up your mind
and don't come back this time
you were always the one crushing me
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I'm glad you like it, so thank you. 
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there are two very distinct feelings here. the right-hand side, with the moon almost feels angry, while there's a sadness and desperation to the other side. I almost feel like it's too personal to critique. I will say that the hands on the girl look really cool, like a spider-creature of longing. which... isn't a bad idea, mythology-wise.
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It is a bit..personal, yes. Anything with the page numbers for titles like this are. Sort of a..art diary type of sketchbook more than anything else.
But you're pretty spot on with that, though not so much with the anger. Maybe more..frustration or a lot of harried thoughts and feelings.
Spider-creature is a good way too see it. I was more or less going for that. Just a bunch of disjointed limbs and hands pulling and clinging that the..faceless, bodiless...thing.
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I agree, the faceless, bodiless thing, coupled with the other one that's all limbs... It does get across frustration a lot more now that I look at it that way.
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Glad you see it a bit more now.
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