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anaardeleana [2016-07-16 02:30:38 +0000 UTC]
I really liked this!
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Vampireneko2 [2014-11-09 01:13:11 +0000 UTC]
Very good; realistic, but not vulgar.
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iced-ninja [2013-07-25 19:59:03 +0000 UTC]
I love this. You should totally write more.
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kubuk13 [2013-01-01 11:51:20 +0000 UTC]
Very beautiful story of a miracle
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GoldenGirl954 [2012-12-12 14:08:04 +0000 UTC]
Wow that was very intense...ouch the details
Nice job
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Helen-The-Potato [2012-09-10 05:10:11 +0000 UTC]
have u experienced this b4 cuz its really realistic! luv it!
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MegMcGee06 [2012-03-04 21:00:54 +0000 UTC]
It's incredible! Amazing you didn't go overboard at all I loved it!! I hope you rite more!
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DeliriousDenail In reply to MegMcGee06 [2012-03-05 05:20:06 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. I'm actually in the process of writing an other one. Just be patient with me. I tend to procrastinate.
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MegMcGee06 In reply to DeliriousDenail [2012-03-06 01:41:18 +0000 UTC]
Not a problem. I completely understand I'm the same way!!
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Sanna2011 [2012-03-04 00:01:43 +0000 UTC]
I like the way you use the pain of childbirth in this story. I love it a lot.
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DeliriousDenail In reply to Sanna2011 [2012-03-04 16:37:43 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. I'm trying to be as realistic as I can.
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Sanna2011 In reply to DeliriousDenail [2012-03-05 00:11:43 +0000 UTC]
That okay. Have you read some of my childbirth stories? Some you will wondering 'what on earth is she trying to write here' and some will suprise you. I love writing childbirth stories.
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DeliriousDenail In reply to Sanna2011 [2012-03-05 05:14:18 +0000 UTC]
Actually I have read a few of your stories. Yeah, sometimes they can be a bit hard to understand, but they're still fun to read.
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Sanna2011 In reply to DeliriousDenail [2012-03-05 05:21:38 +0000 UTC]
The one you cn not understand abit, because they are write very late at night when i am very tried. That what happen what a story idea is burning into mind. I might be taking a small break from childbirth stories for a bit, and will pcik up later. I got one story that I will like to type up for everyone. The Preface is up now.
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PharaohBec [2012-03-03 10:04:48 +0000 UTC]
Omg that was great! Not a lot of people put a lot of detail into birthing stories. There are many reasons for that (they may feel embarrassed, not have experienced it yet, etc) but I love the fact that you have been brave and added all of that in!
Keep up the great work!
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DeliriousDenail In reply to PharaohBec [2012-03-03 16:42:21 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I've never been pregnant, so I based everything the mother felt off things I've read or heard pregnant people say.
I find it irksome when people are sloppy with writting or skip out details, so I figured I'd test my luck. Thanks for the bout of confidence!
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Multicoloredspirit [2012-03-03 06:23:58 +0000 UTC]
This is great!! Detail like this is what more birth stories need, and what a lot of people can't provide. It's just the right amount of detail, story, side comments, and feeling. I'd like to see more~!
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DeliriousDenail In reply to Multicoloredspirit [2012-03-03 16:47:43 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! You're stories are good as well. I dislike no detail and it's always refreshing finding good authors.
I'm definately going to do more, however I'm a procrastinator and bound to spontansiety, so I'd welcome pactience.
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Multicoloredspirit In reply to DeliriousDenail [2012-03-03 20:07:29 +0000 UTC]
I totally understand. If you need any ideas, my partner ~Bellyguy123 and I would be glad to help.
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