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The girl with the eyes of a God.
She sees all,
And is all.
The girl with stars in her eyes.
She sees your heart,
She sees all,
And is all.
Immediately, this one came to my head.
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They literally look like a clear night sky. OF COURSE THEY ARE BEAUTIFUL!
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Here eyes are beautiful through, my eyes on my oc are most likely weirder
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Her eyes is pretty... She controls the galaxy, Plot Twist XD
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her eyes are sooo beautiful 
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I'm not sure who's eyes I love more Dina's or Helen's...
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I wish I could paint like that.... TEACH ME SENPAI!
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I wish I had your art skill, then I could draw my creepypasta up.
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I can not explain how amazingly beautiful your art is!!!
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It's adorable so far... It's like ...wow... and I have to say her eyes are actually beautiful!
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I agree that those are the most pretty eyes ever
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Omg that second panel 
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I ship them so much! They're so cute together <3
Love how the painting actually looks like a painting in the bottom right as well!
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2nd panel: (Dina) Nothing, it's just...I can't go to sleep. Well...Do you think my eyes look terrible? They scared you, right?
3rd panel: (Helen) Actually I think...they're beautiful. You don't need to hide them from me.
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I love her eyes! I guess you could say they... shine like stars?
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Spotted a few grammar mistakes here, but other than that, I think you did a great job!
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can you tell me how change those grammar mistakes??
sorry about my poor English : (
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Well, you should change the lines from "Is my eyes terrible" to "Are my eyes terrible?" because eyes is a plural noun. If you have plural noun, you have to use the plural form of "is" which is "Are"
And the line "It is beautiful" that Helen noted should be "They're beautiful" because he's gesturing to the pair of eyes Angel has. Also, you could change "you needn't deliberately hidden it up" into "You didn't need to deliberately hide it from me." or something like that.
And if you need anymore help with English, feel free to ask!
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