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Published: 2009-02-14 08:52:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 413; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 3
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Description One more...
Just one more pill
I need that last trip
I don't want to feel ill.

One more...
Just one more dose
My mind can't take it
I feel a breakdown coming close.

One more...
Just one more gash
You'll never understand
How hard I've crashed.

One more...
Just one more prick
The heroine flow
Doesn't make me feel so sick.

One more...
Just one more day
To make things right
To tell you what I have to say.

One more...
Just one more chance
I'll move forward
Without a backwards glance.

One more...
Just one more smile
It's been a while...
...it's been a while...
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Comments: 25

Shaolin-fist-47 [2009-06-15 13:33:05 +0000 UTC]

thats really good, i love the pattern to it and how you ended, i like doing that kinded thing

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DEMIAH In reply to Shaolin-fist-47 [2009-06-15 20:25:31 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! :]]
I know what you mean. :3 it was hella fun, I won't lie

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Shaolin-fist-47 In reply to DEMIAH [2009-06-16 08:40:10 +0000 UTC]

lol, no problems, i usualy am most creative at my highs or lows, im in the middle right now so i probably wont put any new stuff up...

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DEMIAH In reply to Shaolin-fist-47 [2009-06-20 09:01:27 +0000 UTC]

I know how that goes, hun xD It's just kind of been bleh for me lately.

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Shaolin-fist-47 In reply to DEMIAH [2009-06-20 11:49:52 +0000 UTC]

bleh? as in bleh neutral like i dont care or bleh as in bad bleh?

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DEMIAH In reply to Shaolin-fist-47 [2009-06-21 09:47:07 +0000 UTC]

Bleh as in bad bleh. xD

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Shaolin-fist-47 In reply to DEMIAH [2009-06-21 10:38:41 +0000 UTC]

want to elaborate on it?

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DEMIAH In reply to Shaolin-fist-47 [2009-06-25 06:37:49 +0000 UTC]

Well, I've been moving. No bueno.

Guys are jerks. Damn douche nozzles.

"Friend" issues. No bueno either.

Family issues like always.

Etc etc etc

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Shaolin-fist-47 In reply to DEMIAH [2009-06-25 13:35:29 +0000 UTC]

well, the douche bag subject im a bloody professor, and it was also help to know what bueno was, and why non of it..

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DEMIAH In reply to Shaolin-fist-47 [2009-06-26 09:55:19 +0000 UTC]

"No bueno" = No good lol

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Shaolin-fist-47 In reply to DEMIAH [2009-06-26 13:56:00 +0000 UTC]

aaah i follow now , lol, but ive had all those problems 10 times over, ive lived in something like 9 different houses, so thats close to 10, and as always the girls and douche bag subject, as ive already said im a professor and family and friend issues, well lets just say that those last 3 have left me what i like to call "emotionally detatched" wanna talk about it?

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DEMIAH In reply to Shaolin-fist-47 [2009-07-06 04:45:30 +0000 UTC]

Eh... I..dunno.
I don't really like talking about my problems to people.. :\
I just feel like I'm doing endless bitching when really, it'll be like...two sentences lol

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Shaolin-fist-47 In reply to DEMIAH [2009-07-06 08:34:07 +0000 UTC]

i dont like it either .
most of the time i do is becuase they just sort of explode out on someone unsuspecting.
feels good afterwards though.

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DEMIAH In reply to Shaolin-fist-47 [2009-07-09 22:21:08 +0000 UTC]

How it works for me...
...well, I guess I sort of...like, start with a bad day. People ask me how I am, and I tell them the truth (which I never do, I normally say I'm good and shiz like that when I'm balling my eyes out. I love talking online x]). They ask what's wrong and I just let it out. It normally only happens when I'm really REALLY pissed off because I end up telling them "You're gonna sit through my story and you're gonna like it".
Then I tell 'em and it feels good as I rant, but afterwards I'm like "...damn that was kinda bitchy".
:S

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Shaolin-fist-47 In reply to DEMIAH [2009-07-10 06:45:24 +0000 UTC]

lol, yeh i usually do the same

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DEMIAH In reply to Shaolin-fist-47 [2009-07-16 18:29:13 +0000 UTC]

So that's one of the reasons why I don't like to :S

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Shaolin-fist-47 In reply to DEMIAH [2009-07-17 13:27:42 +0000 UTC]

lol

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DreamsLive [2009-02-24 16:35:58 +0000 UTC]

It's good. I especially like the verse
"One more...
Just one more gash
You'll never understand
How hard I've crashed."

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DEMIAH In reply to DreamsLive [2009-02-24 22:25:52 +0000 UTC]

:3 thank you!

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Sandy33311 [2009-02-15 04:56:57 +0000 UTC]

Great analogy....

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DEMIAH In reply to Sandy33311 [2009-02-15 06:16:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you :3

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Heragi-Renji [2009-02-14 16:39:43 +0000 UTC]

omg that was so...

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DEMIAH In reply to Heragi-Renji [2009-02-14 21:10:30 +0000 UTC]

o.o so what...? O.O was it ok?

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Heragi-Renji In reply to DEMIAH [2009-03-30 23:05:12 +0000 UTC]

it was amazing, I was speechless with aww that's what it all meant, sry to leave u hanging like that

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DEMIAH In reply to Heragi-Renji [2009-04-01 05:11:47 +0000 UTC]

Lol it's quite alright.
But thank you. I appreciate the good comment <3

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