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demolibium — The ocean of sorrows
Published: 2013-11-29 17:40:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 565; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 3
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"Sometimes, letting someone go is not as easy....."Hello people, hope you like my first attempt on a landscape photomanip (i have done just 2 manips yet and also those on portraits_
So i hope it catches your eye and you can leave comments to help me get better or just appreciate my work ,it would be great
Thank you
Credits :-
Model- fc01.deviantart.net/fs70/f/201…
Background- fc03.deviantart.net/fs70/f/201…
Sky- fc07.deviantart.net/fs28/f/200…
Ship- fc06.deviantart.net/fs13/f/200…
Light- fc09.deviantart.net/fs22/f/200…
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Comments: 17
#It looks difficult to match the two source of light: rain and sun. But it's very well matched here. The atmosphere is very sad, very goods feelings on it.
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Okay this is just flat out beautiful, and I really love how blue it is
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You have a really terrific composition here. I like the breaking clouds with the moon shining through. The storm-tossed sea is very nice as well.
A couple of things I would suggest - you've used a technique to make your "rain" that is too uniform. Even rain coming down in a bad storm is not perfectly straight and quite so solid. You might try one of these tutorials The second one gives particularly good tips on doing the splash effect off of an object - like the model. Additionally, the light rays are rather too pronounced. I would suggest that you soften them - perhaps by reducing the opacity by about 20%. Your light should be coming from the moon peeping out of the clouds. Instead, the moon is not producing light, but the light seems to be coming from some indeterminate spot in the sky. You would do better to relocate your moon to the light source. This is what I mean sta.sh/021li9nz0e2y As others have commented, bringing your boat into a little better focus would help too. It's gotten so soft that although it is very opaque, like one would see of a fairly close object, the edges make it look blobish. Alternately, if you want it to be further away from the shore, reduce the opacity to make it blend more into the background waves.
I really like this piece and hope to see more from you!
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Wow, that is the sweetest comment ever in the history of awesome comments 
Thank you for such a wonderful advice and critique
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Hey so I wanted I know I said I would comment on this, but I agree with everything said above. So I will rather then focus on commenting on the other new works you made.
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Wow! the water looks quite comfortably realistic on the subjective model and the pier! But the ship become too hazy, not that it's ruining the beauty of this piece, plus I love how you also made a long shadow of the model 
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Thank you, i will keep that in mind
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#This is so beautiful! I love the light and the water looks really realistic and beautiful! Not that I would have been able to do anything in this picutre but maybe you could have made tight look more like it was raining. The woman is really butiful! She really looks as if she was going to jump into the sea. and drown deep in the black sea.....
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Thanks for such a sweet comments, and i thought of making it more stormy but i couldnt do it well
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