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DemonKing-aka-Grim — Betrayal
Published: 2012-03-25 21:25:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 174; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description I've had enough of this game
You've set on me.
You thought you could keep me tame
And control all I be.
But you made a grave error
That will cost you dear.
Beware of the terror
For your soul I will sear.
You've unleashed my rage
On you and this world.
I've broken free of my cage
And my hatred has been unfurled.
This is only the start
So beware the darkness I've set on thee.
My spirit was torn apart
When you betrayed me.
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Comments: 1

Darksknight [2013-01-02 18:50:56 +0000 UTC]

I really like this one. The flow of the poem was perfect, the rhyme uncanny, and I just loved the overall story the poem tells. .Great job!

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