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Published: 2015-02-09 15:22:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 2086; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 14
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Description The mannequinn shows no emotion but inside there is turmoil. The pain and heartache always remains hidden from the outside.

The artwork is by LustofaDeeperPain and is also called Masked Beauty. Here is a link to the artwork:
Masked Beauty

Here is alink to the profile page of LustofaDeeperPain;
lust0fadeeperpain.deviantart.c…

Here is a link to the text version of the poem:
Masked Beauty

I am really grateful to LustofaDeeperPain for giving me permission to use her artwork. I hope you like the completed work.
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Comments: 26

VanessaSwann13 [2015-03-08 07:32:32 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow. I read the other one, 'Silent Beauty', and this was just as touching

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demonrobber In reply to VanessaSwann13 [2015-03-08 08:05:31 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for your kind words.

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VanessaSwann13 In reply to demonrobber [2015-03-08 08:55:31 +0000 UTC]

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darkchandelier95 [2015-02-23 05:19:44 +0000 UTC]

I wrote something like this once- only it was about a humanoid/robot 

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demonrobber In reply to darkchandelier95 [2015-02-23 09:48:51 +0000 UTC]

I will have to read it. I am pleased you like it.

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darkchandelier95 In reply to demonrobber [2015-03-03 07:38:11 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. It's somewhere in my twitter images, though- you'll have to scroll really deep down to find it 

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BajanPolski [2015-02-20 13:15:45 +0000 UTC]

(This was very beautiful. I must say, i'm impressed.   )

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demonrobber In reply to BajanPolski [2015-02-20 14:05:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the positive feedback. Much appreciated.

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BajanPolski In reply to demonrobber [2015-02-20 14:08:12 +0000 UTC]

(You're very welcome!)

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Webdoll [2015-02-10 03:44:32 +0000 UTC]

     
 I am impressed with the words you so simply connected to this beautiful photo of Melissa'a mannequin. To be beautiful eternally is what I feel every woman's dream would be so that they would be desirable forever....But she did not anticipate the Soothsayers evilness and I am sure that she did not wish to be trapped in a mannequins body for all eternity. Excellent imagination! 




 

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demonrobber In reply to Webdoll [2015-02-10 08:50:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you kindly.

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Webdoll In reply to demonrobber [2015-02-10 12:57:59 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure I assure you

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LuLupoo [2015-02-10 01:16:36 +0000 UTC]

 Although this poem you made for Melissa's mannequin photo was sad, I have to say you did an awesome job with it. The words were very deep and meaningful. Excellent way with words. Went perfect with the mannequin. You could almost feel for the mannequin. Brilliant.
   

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demonrobber In reply to LuLupoo [2015-02-10 08:51:22 +0000 UTC]

I think the poem and the mannequin are a good match. I am delighted you like it. Thanks.

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LuLupoo In reply to demonrobber [2015-02-10 13:22:48 +0000 UTC]

Oh my yes loved it.

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wannabestuck [2015-02-10 00:28:54 +0000 UTC]

Haunting and lovely. 

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demonrobber In reply to wannabestuck [2015-02-10 08:51:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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Urban-Chill [2015-02-09 23:12:29 +0000 UTC]

 Thank you for writing this poem for Melissa. And choosing this lovely mannequin shot. I must admit I was really very pleasantly surprised to see this. What great sorrow in this poem. Although it is sad I must say I just love the way you compose words so beautifully. Lovely and well worth the time spent reading this. 

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demonrobber In reply to Urban-Chill [2015-02-09 23:55:46 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for your kind words. it is a sad poem. The artwork was so inspiring. I think sad moments are often the most beautiful.

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Urban-Chill In reply to demonrobber [2015-02-10 03:12:31 +0000 UTC]

You are most welcome. But there is also beauty sometimes even in sadness and you as the very talented writer would know how to connect such emotion so easily I have read some mannequin poems and stories that come through the group that I was not so impressed with as some don't really make a lot of sense.

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Bitch0nline [2015-02-09 22:54:12 +0000 UTC]

wow this is a wonderful piece of writing. Although there is a sadness about it. I have to say to you I know Melissa and she really is proud to have a photo of one of her mannequins chosen for this poem. beautiful writing guy!!!

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demonrobber In reply to Bitch0nline [2015-02-09 23:56:41 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the positive feedback. It is much appreciated.

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Bitch0nline In reply to demonrobber [2015-02-10 03:17:13 +0000 UTC]

Your very welcome

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Doll-Ladi [2015-02-09 22:11:05 +0000 UTC]



I must say was very excited when I saw this poem and read it. I love this very beautiful tale and although there is a real sadness to it I was so amazed by your ability to write such a lovely and poignant piece. I have to say that you are a person of real talent and great imagination.  The beauty of this poem has been brought  to the surface. I am so honored to have such a inspiring writer make a poem with one of my favorite mannequin shots.  I love it and I am so thrilled that you chose one of my mannequins to work with. I am grateful. I love it. Thank you so much        

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demonrobber In reply to Doll-Ladi [2015-02-09 23:58:16 +0000 UTC]

You are most welcome. I think your artwork and my poem make the perfect combination.

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Doll-Ladi In reply to demonrobber [2015-02-10 02:56:10 +0000 UTC]

This was a great pleasure for me and I think it did go very well. I must admit I really do love it and enjoy your poetry I was reading some of your poems. 

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