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Published: 2007-01-15 06:08:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 3476; Favourites: 46; Downloads: 34
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I kinda like how it's all... godly XD OOH, LOFTY TEXT. Sorry for the poor placement.I'm really tempted to just... not color the next pages AT ALL, greyscale or no, or somehow find an easier way to do it. Cos. Well. All I wanna do is tell a story D: NOT BREAK MY FREAKING FINGERS COLORING IT.
I like the water effect, the first panel-area, and Razer and Rayne look SO FREAKING SEKKASAY. <3 Uuuh.
I want them BOTH. :B *snitches*
JakX (x) NDI
Highest Bidder = mine
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Comments: 21
Holy crack, that's my favorite font. XD
Copperplate Gothic Bold. *nerdface* okay. Beautiful setup, by the way, I don't think there's anything wrong with the placement of the text. And the colors being more symbolically laid than being for realism are really great for the feeling.
Uh...Ill leave you alone now.
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Great first page! Totally looking forward to the next page!
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oooh first page plus third-person monologue! Already pwning. ^^
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RAYNE AND RAZER R GOING TO GET MARRIEDZ LOL.
ok, ok no, but I'm going to marry Raynes because you make her look so damn sexy <3 I just LOOOVE the comic&the idea behind it. It really looks like it will be interesting and eeeeee.. Nicki comics are hot ok. Gah, and the colours are really just gorgeous <3
I LUVU NICKIS ; ; come back to mee!
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This couple are like a bond between, the background are amazing. very talented!
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Awesome! You did a very nice job of coloring (I have absolutely no patience to color on the computer) and the story is looking to be interesting!
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Eee! I love the watery panel; there's a squid in there! And all the blues look seeexy awesome.
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well... no matter what you thought how hard it was; it totally paid off... i mean; you've accomplished fish flying around them in a non-make believe piccy of the Jak characters.... this sounds like a hard core story; nice title
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WEEEEE! RazerRayn luff! 
Afterall it's the story that counts!
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hunny this is gorgeous! nice original panel work. lovely images of Kras. i like where this is going and i'm salavating in anticipation for all the pages after this. lovely work sweety!
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SQUID!
There's a squid in there, right? 8D
Ahem. Ooo, I like it! The beginning has the neon lights (which was in your fic I said I'd review, oh, a YEAR AGO >.<; but I still remember that sentence because it was so awesome)! And I really liked the very last phrase. Hmm hmm, so true!
I've seen Razer helping Rayn in some fics, which kind of confused me. Shall wait with anticipation and other suchies for the next page!
Also, especially like their faces in the last panel; very stylized. <3
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KAAAAAA. *mauls you over*
I love the panel with the sillhouettes and fishies. FISHES. >:[ I dunno. I love fish. I like the red one that's all googly-eyed and curled like a Victoria Secret model.
NYA. <3
Oh yeah. I heart how you draw Rayn. :[ Gorjus, is she~!
Duuuude. like. Um. ... Razer reminds me of that guy in the Esurence [howeveryouspellit] commercial. xD! Still hot, though. :B
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sweeet XD i love Razer...Rayne...not so much pretty sweet begining for this.
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How do you manage to do it? This is great! I've been trying for so long to start my comic. What's your secret?
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Totally agree, the colors are awesomeness made, well, color. But if you're going for monochrome maybe go with blue (or blueish gray?) I think it would add something.
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Look beautiful! You may have broken your fingers, but the colours are really very pretty
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