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Demyrie — Seven Grey Years: TFA spoiler

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Description Implied spoiler for the ending of TFA season 2!

I swear I'll stop this 'uploading every single night' thing. Swear.

... The concept wouldnt leave me alone, gaiz. Srsly. I kinda like the result, I kinda don't like it. Mostly... don't.

Yay: THE LINEART, Bumblebee's utterly feral look, his scuffed-upness/scars/cracked optic, Sari's expression + facial proportions and her blistering skin fragments

BOO: Rough coloring on Sari, her freakinghorrible hair, her too-subtle autobot crest, her too-generic-angry-comicbook-beauty-Electra-syndrome, SHE'S TOO FREAKING OLD I WANTED HER 16, and most of the lighting.

Relevant piece: [link]

Based on V

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It was a darker time on Earth.

Perhaps it was the darkest time, but such an assumption would have brazenly dared the night to deepen and swallow them whole. So Prowl kept his silence. It was the only thing he had left—his silence and his solitude--and they had lost so much.

The war against the Decepticons had escalated for years—seven grey years—and finally left them in the wreckage of Detroit with little hope and fewer options. While pain was ever-present, the first real loss hit them five years in. Isaac Sumdac was crushed in an ambush while working intel for the Autobot assault, and fourteen-year-old Sari became quiet and strange after seeing her father and creator’s unrecognizable body peel away from the girders of the blackened warehouse. The following morning, the only thing left undiminished in her quaking female body was a capacity for hatred.

She seared a patch of her artificial skin away and carved an Autobot symbol into her sparking midnight exostructure with a kitchen knife. An agonizing circuit snapped into existence every time the conductive tool touched her plating, so the act nearly killed her, but two years had drained away and still the crest glowed, as much a part of her as her father. She was truly one of them, now, and they mourned it every day.

Bulkhead went offline valiantly.

Bumblebee insisted that it should have been him to go, and it was true. Bulkhead—loving, gluttonous Bulkhead—had thrown himself into Blitzwing’s cite and taken the blast for his best friend. There was little they could do: his spark-chamber was nothing but a delicate silicone eggshell, smoke-marbled and smashed through the center when they found it. Truly, it should have been Bumblebee, but what began as a piteous mantra in the night for the traumatized ‘bot warped into a hissing attack: a source of envy that Bulkhead was not forced to live through this darkening reality. Bumblebee no longer grinned, played or laughed, but clawed out at his friends as he would his enemies, sunny jibes long-ossified into barbs.

Sari was the only one who could physically touch him.

Ratchet was powering down, little by little. Some days were worse than others: on the worst of them, he would fall into fits of uncontrollable stasis, internal pressure dropping and tensors slackening without warning. He would remain stalled until one of them found him crumpled on the ground, or crashed over his scruffy projects, electro-pulse a mere whisper of static. A quick jolt was all it would take to bring him back online, but it still wounded the crusty Medibot internally; more than he could bear. A century ago, he’d been getting old: now, in seven short stellar-cycles, he was long past it.

He waited for death the way someone waited for a late train.

Optimus’ left optic-slot had scarred over: the wait for a replacement had dragged on too long, and his self-preserving wiring had snaked out to cover the battle wound. Megatron kept the dull blue chip mounted on his front, snapped into the Decepticon crest. The war had changed him from a friend into a harsh, withholding leader, and with that change went their last hope of being happy together after it was all over.

Their darling little family was collapsing from within and Sari struggled to hold them together, hulking cold insufficiencies and all, with her tiny hands. All of their actions were modified malfunctions, and every move, every word could be called into question, but there were too many questions already. Each coped with the misery their own particular way, all of them fighting the best they could in the empty city and for their empty Sari, but they were missing something. Rather, something had been taken from each of them: and while Prowl had always been known for his lone-wolf ways, a ‘bot had few places to turn to for relief now that home wasn’t home anymore.

He began to look up.

-.-.-.-.-

Up = Lockdown, by the by.

... ohnoes, right? Summary: Optimus = asshole, Bulkhead = dead, Bumblebee = bee-yotch, Ratchet = suicide watch, Sari = vicious and Prowl = silent basket case. Makes you want to die a little bit D: I'VE RUINED TRANSFORMERS ANIMATED.

Still, the idea of Sari being all cyborg-kick-assy with her Key as a power-source makes me veeeeery interested.

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Comments: 69

Mallans-baking In reply to ??? [2019-03-29 21:52:01 +0000 UTC]

It was a while since you saw that picture. It is so well done and I like the style

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PizzaGirl21 [2014-03-12 18:32:04 +0000 UTC]

cool

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kateking1 [2014-01-31 17:09:46 +0000 UTC]

you can see her autobot symbol in her chest in awesome if yoyu look REALLY hard

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Animegirl2800 [2013-08-31 03:15:24 +0000 UTC]

Cool :\

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AudrieTheBumblebee [2012-05-24 13:34:59 +0000 UTC]

Nice

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gir131 [2012-01-16 00:09:32 +0000 UTC]

it's such a beautiful idea, though!
keep at it!

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neosapian6 [2011-12-22 17:56:17 +0000 UTC]

bumblebee is pissed, i suggest we run... like now

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Elyon787 [2011-10-09 17:06:57 +0000 UTC]

Is it just me, or dose Sari look pregnant?

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Swiftstone In reply to Elyon787 [2012-10-26 22:58:25 +0000 UTC]

Did...did bee do it? It sounds like he may have in the story....

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gir131 In reply to Elyon787 [2012-01-16 00:10:42 +0000 UTC]

what an interesting idea....

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xMosspelt [2011-08-18 15:01:53 +0000 UTC]

Is this really what happens?

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ZethDarke [2011-05-19 16:54:57 +0000 UTC]

Could you do a picture of what Optimus looks like?

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laraanita [2011-05-19 15:32:30 +0000 UTC]

...This is kind of creepy and yet I LOVE the idea

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Jazzninja545 [2011-05-08 14:46:27 +0000 UTC]

Oh and furthermore....I wouldn't alter Sari at all. I think how she looks keeps the anger tension very well. Together, I would not wish to mess with them. Good Job on this.

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Jazzninja545 [2011-05-08 14:44:17 +0000 UTC]

BB reminds me of wolverine!

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primenatorgirl217 [2010-11-26 22:23:31 +0000 UTC]

Sari and Bumblebee look AWESOME.

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TheDriftingPen [2010-06-14 21:22:16 +0000 UTC]

i love tis, is so original and well made.

a good way to get a 'younger' look, try a rounder face next time

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barbie321 [2010-03-06 06:14:57 +0000 UTC]

i love the roughness of this, you can see how much they've hardened

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Emilyrose97 [2009-11-24 10:05:28 +0000 UTC]

Bumblebee is PISSED! HAHAH LOL great drawing keep it up UR NUMBAH NE

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soulsearcher13 [2009-11-11 01:06:56 +0000 UTC]

well....dang. I really dont have the words to describe how amazing this is.

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GShepherd17 [2009-09-19 03:15:32 +0000 UTC]

Is sari and bee still friends?

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GShepherd17 [2009-09-19 03:09:50 +0000 UTC]

Hey what did you mean by

"Sari was the only one who could touch him physically"

What does that mean? Are they still friends?

Just two questions .

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Queen-of-Asgard [2009-09-07 18:24:18 +0000 UTC]

This picture makes me think of the song "Welcome Home" by Coheed and Cambria

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spiderxand [2009-07-29 17:54:04 +0000 UTC]

I've just now read the story. I felt my soul ache. And I never noticed the Autobot insignia where Sari's cleavage lay. I like the way you portrayed the dark and dismal future. Very Terminator like.

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XxBlackpantherxX [2009-06-26 10:58:36 +0000 UTC]

omg awsome!!
poor bulkhead =.=...well poor all of em.

this is a good rp idea, but i won't steal XD

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black01scarlet [2009-06-10 21:05:39 +0000 UTC]

i saw your pic on youtube! so cool!

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Demyrie In reply to black01scarlet [2009-06-10 22:11:53 +0000 UTC]

Where did you see it? Can you give me a link? :3

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black01scarlet In reply to Demyrie [2009-06-10 22:22:04 +0000 UTC]

[link]

the clip is also very cool !

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spiderxand [2009-04-06 22:58:30 +0000 UTC]

I like! They mean buisness!

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KitteyCat1010 [2009-04-02 21:59:11 +0000 UTC]

This is one of those things I want to read but am afraid to read it! Its wonderful!

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TheOneYouLeastExpect [2009-03-10 02:45:36 +0000 UTC]

This is awesome! Dont' change a thing!! *insta faves*

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shadowrokzX3 [2009-03-06 18:49:56 +0000 UTC]

finaly i found out what happened to sari after that tfa ep, where she sees that she is a robot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! omg its been buggin me eva since i saw that episode...
i'm soooo glad i found this pic and read the comment!
wen i read wot happend i waz well gutted that bulkhead went offline!!! n i'm surprized ratchet is still online....

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TeiOuja [2009-02-16 07:26:47 +0000 UTC]

Au' contrare, you made it look kinda cool, especially the 'feral BB' motif.

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TransformersLover [2009-01-24 22:14:42 +0000 UTC]

I know this isn't real but...Bulkhead not being alive makes me want to cry.

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nomia137 [2009-01-20 05:38:04 +0000 UTC]

OMIGAH! I am so flippin in love with this, as well as the story from which it came. (Go LockdownxProwl, woot!)

Absolutely amazing work. I was praising your name before, but now -- GAH! *bows at her master's feet*

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Vampiric-Conure [2009-01-15 18:12:56 +0000 UTC]

Remind me not to piss off your version of BumbleBee ^.^

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nightchildmoonchild [2008-12-12 02:17:13 +0000 UTC]

This is completely awesome!Fits an amazing story!

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TaintedTamer [2008-11-25 22:18:49 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow, very cool! <3

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i-love-kouga911 [2008-10-28 16:51:04 +0000 UTC]

please do NOT tell me that is what is realy going to happen!? i couldnt stand it if bumblebee didnt smile ant more!!! please tell me its not real!!!!!! "sob"

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Demyrie In reply to i-love-kouga911 [2008-10-28 16:58:33 +0000 UTC]

Haha, no, darling, it's not real. Just a story I thought up--TFA is so light and happy, I'm sure nothing like this would ever BEGIN to happen :3 Bumblebee's shameless grin will live on!

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i-love-kouga911 In reply to Demyrie [2008-10-28 17:00:27 +0000 UTC]

thank gawd!!! i would like to read your story so i think i will get to that. but what the heck happened to make bumblebee go like that in your story?

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angelus2402004 [2008-10-23 03:41:18 +0000 UTC]

Awesome job!! That looks fantastic!

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experi-mental [2008-10-08 02:37:29 +0000 UTC]

:B the emotion in Sari's face is just beautiful - plus aauuuughh, she just is so beautiful in general

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EcliptorCalrissian [2008-09-15 05:03:45 +0000 UTC]

That's amazing. And I first saw it a long time ago, but only now noticed that some of the circuitry in her chest sorta takes on the shape of the Autobot symbol. Nice touch.

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CactusBuddy [2008-08-29 08:59:44 +0000 UTC]

nice effort to bumblebee

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WhiteTigerDemoness [2008-08-26 00:06:19 +0000 UTC]

....I'm going to go read that fic, and every moment of it I will be singing your praises.

Dems is EPIC

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XxNiGhTsToRmXx [2008-08-20 19:33:43 +0000 UTC]

I read this story on FF.net it was very moving...T-T

great work btw, very dark...oO

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AvatarKiba [2008-08-18 17:57:12 +0000 UTC]

Far from ruined. If anything, such an edgy story would make the show infiniely better.

I have to wonder a few things, though.
1) You mentioned the words Megatron and Optimus, and "together"...I'm confused there...
2) Prowl looked up, and Up=Lockdown; bounty hunter here for the kill, or alliance?
3)If it's so bad on Earth, why hasn't the Cybertron Elite Guard come back to help? Were they destroyed in some sort of first attack?

From what I can gather, this is basically how it could've happened had Megatron won in "A Bridge Too Close", right?

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Demyrie In reply to AvatarKiba [2008-08-19 01:22:28 +0000 UTC]

Why, thank you! <3 I know the show's theme is so lighthearted, it would NEVER take this turn... but still, it's fun to play with edginess and lost values :3 Onward and forward to ANSWERS!

That Megs+Optimus thing was... a typo? *shakes her head* I phrased it weird. Optimus has noooothing to do with Megatron asides the whole 'mortal enemy' thing! XD He's just... a super-dick. Sincerely, I'm so uninterested in Mr. Prime that he was an afterthought. So... bad on my part!

Prowl and Lockdown are, uh. Shall we say 'involved'? XD Fic is here, if you care to gander: [link] Prowl is basically turning to Lockdown for temporary distraction from the war. THIS was the original purpose of the featured 'one-shot', but it's quickly dribbled outward into a mess of its own... I can't stop it D:

Yes, these are the events as they would've unrolled if Megatron had succeeded in building his beloved space-bridge. However, now that they have their leader back (teleported into their midst like a god, with an allspark shard or three to boot!), the 'Cons utterly berserker the 'Bot forces in a first rush, and Megs makes a personal point to skewer the elite guard. Perhaps they could get to Earth, despite damages, but ye olde evil-bot has cordoned off earth from all outside influences until HE can destroy OP's crew and get all the Spark shards for himself.

While I can't do anything with it as an epic-style story (COLLEGE. *grits teeth*), lovely, disconnected scenes are popping into my head o____o Thank you sincerely for your questions: they filled in some holes that even I hadn't thought about!

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AvatarKiba In reply to Demyrie [2008-08-19 01:51:49 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the answers. These are just the kinds of things that swim around in my head; I can't stand loose ends, hence my Avatar The Last Airbender follow-up collab-fic, Untouchable.

Wait, Prowl/Lockdown slash?

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