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deniall — Wars within
Published: 2006-02-26 02:30:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 108; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Description We soldiers linger on dawn's edge,
knowing the sun shall rise to another day.
Hidden from sight we await our destiny,
lurking behind a rose bush of thorns.

The charge is called,
yet we do not move forward,
we are frozen by the knowledge of what will be,
the inevitable pricking of ourselves,
through future fight and the thorns that linger at minds sight.

Our cowardice leads to the day's slaughter,
our own nothingness leading to possibilities end.
The day is gone and night is upon us,
in the darkness we mourn the loss and the night leads on...

Tomorrow when dawn approaches we will do the same,
our indecision on life itself condems us to this endless battle,
waged not with people, but with life itself.
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Comments: 3

Alzemu [2006-03-07 18:27:14 +0000 UTC]

i love it...just simply loved it.

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deniall In reply to Alzemu [2006-03-08 07:34:17 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou!!!

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MidnightShadow83 [2006-02-27 04:39:56 +0000 UTC]

That is a deeply moving piece. Life, the eternal struggle. This is a piece with attitude, and that's always a fav.
I hope things are getting better for you. If not, then I know they will soon.
Rob

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