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Published: 2009-10-21 04:53:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 71572; Favourites: 4506; Downloads: 2232
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Description An 18+ spell from Brennivin !? Brennivin's been a bad bad boy...

Female version of Radiojack, see here for more info

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Critiques are welcome as usual!
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strange-shadow [2010-01-10 22:00:55 +0000 UTC]

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hi i will start with a compliment, this work is amazing and the shading especially is very accomplished and well done. so i congratulate you on that. the skin tone and the warmth in this picture at the same time as having the character in an intimidating pose and facial expression really cements your work as well done.


the first thing to catch your eye in this image is definitely the wings and the shading and attention to detail that have been added here.


then there is the bold amazing tattoo on the upper thigh which is a stark contrast to the warm creamy colours of the skin. well done there ^^


there are only two things i can think of that seem a little strange in this image (they arent wrong, just seem a little awkward)

first is the tail. while it is a good thing in this image, it seems to be floating/not attatched to the body, it seems to be either too light at both the tip and the base or it is a too low attatchment.

and the feet, i think the main problem there was the fact that they are very triangular and rigid. they look a little awkward in comparison to the beauty of the image itself. if they were more curved near the ball of the foot, it would possibly look more natural and comfortable.


overall though, a very captivating and lovely image to look at.

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Gravija-Sunrise [2009-10-21 21:43:58 +0000 UTC]

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I like the colors quite a bit, and the shading is well done. The pose is nice and fluid (though it's amazing how she can keep her balance like that).

The background texture is a nice touch, though I wish the darker parts would overlap with her more -- whenever there's a space that just perfectly shapes around her body, it flattens out the image a little bit, getting rid of some needed depth. If anything, you can just soften up the darker parts to the left of her face, and it would make the background seem a little less constricting (put your finger over it and see for yourself)!

One other thing is the belt -- it looks like it's intersecting her leg a little. That, and the left half of her stomach, which could probably be in shadow, make her midsection look just a bit awkward, though it's certainly easily fixable.

Good work altogether, though. Keep it up!

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TheJerk4 [2009-10-21 14:03:01 +0000 UTC]

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This pic is so amazing! The style is awesome, she really looks cool.
I love the design, it's really creative, has tons of details. The ones I like the most are the dragon tattoo and the horns that look like little wings. I also like her hair style, totally fits the whole idea.
The coloring is great, I like the fusion of the purple and the black and the gradient is subtle, looks good.
The only thing "wrong" in this pic is that it is kind of stereotype, the girl's real skinny with nice curves. But I think her figure fits the whole picture and the whole "dragonish" style.
All in all, it's a really hot picture!

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Yokufo [2009-10-21 12:21:02 +0000 UTC]

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A very nice picture of yours. First of all I really like the pose, it has something appealing, sexy and gracious at the same time. She looks floating and kind of sniffy.
She looks exactly like she is going to say: "You don't wanna mess with me, boy, do you?"

Great colors. The palette of red-violett-pink suits her well, these warm colors give the picture kind of demonic atmosphere. Although i would have used some cold color, like a contrast, some kind of eye catcher. It lacks in my opinion.

Fist of all i thought she was kind of succubus, and indeed he looks that way, but I remembered the Gaian item I myself have and had to laugh ^^

Great interpretation, and a nice tattoo! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)" />

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Dreali85 [2017-03-27 16:31:18 +0000 UTC]

All hail Satan my new God and master...HOORAY!

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Grahamhorridge68 [2016-12-09 19:18:35 +0000 UTC]

Cool I love itΒ 

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LudedWolf [2016-09-28 16:50:12 +0000 UTC]

So it a Trap?

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AmandaChaat [2013-02-27 10:26:08 +0000 UTC]

I do not have time at the moment to give a detailed comment more than this has become my absolute favourite picture and that I would love to see more pictures of this "creature".

The colouring and especially the blending of purples and black on her boots and the red-purple-black of the wings really was what caught my eyes at first.

I also love her facial expression and eyes.

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canpassion [2012-10-01 21:32:02 +0000 UTC]

β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯

Enchanting...

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demonemoguy11 [2012-05-11 07:06:36 +0000 UTC]

Very nice

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Nameless75 [2012-04-26 21:11:58 +0000 UTC]

OMG awesome sexy and beautiful

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matetrix112 [2012-04-26 20:26:16 +0000 UTC]

Oh no she just broke her spine!

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Hollow-nyan [2012-04-06 19:15:02 +0000 UTC]

Amazing work !!! I love it !

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guchoart [2011-10-07 20:27:23 +0000 UTC]

Buen trabajo!
AquΓ­ puedes leer un cuento acerca de una sucubu [link] que publique en mi blog.

Good job!
Here you can read a scucubu story [link] (in spanish) that i wrote.

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tishaartwork [2011-07-25 09:34:33 +0000 UTC]

Great pic !

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frighteningdeceit [2011-07-23 07:02:41 +0000 UTC]

radio jack!? : O
girl!? style!? : O! blasphemy!
but amazing!

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Rainbowbubbles [2011-06-25 09:05:50 +0000 UTC]

super hot!!

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Towers-Aki [2011-06-17 16:13:31 +0000 UTC]

I see Haloween plot with her...

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Rose-AnneGagne [2011-05-21 17:32:45 +0000 UTC]

so sexy XD i love it<3

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BlackWings86 [2011-04-02 06:17:32 +0000 UTC]

[link] < Someone made a base of this.

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Laavad [2011-03-26 21:25:49 +0000 UTC]

Impressive.
Please make more like this, great work.

+fav

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sockrocker04 [2011-03-03 07:36:16 +0000 UTC]

Wow, that's so awesome!

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NoChristmasJokesPlz [2011-02-12 21:58:12 +0000 UTC]

X3 In all honesty, I think Bren would be more into wearing the outfit than the one wearing the outfit... But this is AMAZING.

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anndoradragon [2011-02-11 09:40:23 +0000 UTC]

Most beautiful Sexy ^^

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fangshinobi [2011-01-30 13:42:43 +0000 UTC]

Radio Jack! What happened to you?! Lol

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LunarChii [2011-01-06 02:16:47 +0000 UTC]

Ohhh Nice. @o@ RadioJack<3 Love that item.
>3<
I want to buy art from youuu.
;o;

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KyamiMcClow [2010-12-29 07:35:08 +0000 UTC]

delicious simply delicious instant fav




--
I can't Bl33d so you think you can stop me?
( V )
<*,*>

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Infernalking [2010-12-17 15:31:22 +0000 UTC]

wow SO BEAUTIFUL!!!!!

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njlewis24 [2010-12-14 04:38:45 +0000 UTC]

THIS PIECE IS REALLY SEXY I LOVE IT

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BrooklynPhoenix [2010-12-12 20:07:50 +0000 UTC]

Sweat.

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Bloody-Sekhmet [2010-11-30 14:58:44 +0000 UTC]

awsoome! love the design!!

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Grigori77 [2010-10-15 20:27:11 +0000 UTC]

Nice ...

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Ellamenopea [2010-10-15 11:07:34 +0000 UTC]

FFFFFFFFFF

All your art is amazing... I really like your demon-style girls.
Fave button is officially broken.
Can't wait to see what you do for your 100th deviation!

(it's totally not creepy that I checked your page and noticed you had submitted 99 things...)

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elalbayelocaso [2010-08-22 21:54:29 +0000 UTC]

preciosa

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xixTormentxix [2010-08-21 15:49:56 +0000 UTC]

OMG THIS IS AWESOME!

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TatsukiChan1994 [2010-07-22 21:49:33 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I'm so glad I found you! You see, I didn't get to go to FanimeCon this year, but a friend of mine bought me a print of this while she was there, and I've been looking for the artist ever since! Thank you so much for making this, it's so amazing! I have my print framed and hanging on my wall, i love it so much!

Please keep up the awsome work, your art is amazing and inspiring. I hope to one day be as good of an artist as you.

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Kalli20 [2010-07-16 00:24:05 +0000 UTC]

Succubus? o.O

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GoLDeNTHuNDeRBoLT [2010-07-04 11:02:07 +0000 UTC]

5* so interesting

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eakyplanet [2010-06-29 19:34:00 +0000 UTC]

wow so cool!!

I love devil girl ^^

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JDeko [2010-03-09 05:19:57 +0000 UTC]

Oh dear she is sexy!
the eyes, the lips, the leg wear and tattoo, and the attitude.
quite the femme fatale!

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4rticdemoN [2010-02-21 11:42:03 +0000 UTC]

It's just beautiful

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tenko72 [2010-02-12 23:20:24 +0000 UTC]

Nice design. She's a looker.

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joshevi [2010-02-12 19:45:05 +0000 UTC]

sweet, love it, its perfect

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vampyra15 [2010-01-14 08:14:23 +0000 UTC]

Would it be a sin for me to marry your artwork?

Radiojacktrix....will you marry me?

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Killie6 [2009-12-23 18:10:21 +0000 UTC]

I LOVE IT. IT IS AMAZING!<<33333

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Gesshoku-Safri [2009-12-13 01:52:47 +0000 UTC]

is so cool
I love the vampires, and wooo >o<

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lextoro7 [2009-12-12 03:29:43 +0000 UTC]

she is very beautiful and very sexy. good work

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ExNext [2009-12-06 08:44:30 +0000 UTC]

aswom! one of my favorit now XD...!!
ammm tell me can you give me some tips for my drawing? (i just started to work
with photoshop)i well be grateful!!

thank you and have a great day XD..!

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kitkat4584 [2009-11-28 18:13:22 +0000 UTC]

im sure if he really did that radiojack wouldnt be smiling xD

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MerKatch [2009-11-11 16:40:31 +0000 UTC]

i laughed...SOOOOOOoo hard when i saw this XD
amazing job~

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