aimiyi [2005-07-15 20:15:46 +0000 UTC]
I thought that the relation between death and sleep wouldn't surprise me, but the way you put it as "death of sleep" is very fascinating. This is a beautiful exploration of life and death paralleling night and dawn, and the brevity of this piece only highlights the mortality of men as "mice." Not to end on a sour word, but is it just me or is the "where" in the line "envision realms where grow and spring" a typo? Should it be "which?"
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