Kirjailija [2006-03-30 04:20:27 +0000 UTC]
This is expertly written my friend, your manipulations of the english language shine in this piece. Every line is filled with its own individual meaning instead of merely acting as one more step twords the end of the poem. I'm a huge fan of internal rhyme, and the alliteration lends itself most favorably to this. To top it all off, it's a great message. Well done! Deffinatly a fav. ^^
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candle25 [2006-03-21 00:26:32 +0000 UTC]
Wow! I can relate bro. I pastor told me recently that God sometimes stretches us. If we feel comfortable we may not be doing what we should for the Lord. It is all about balancing and priorities. We just have to be careful not to let the beauty of life pass us by while we race along.
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