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Desert-Chimera — Beauty even in the Winter
Published: 2007-09-08 01:36:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 129; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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This is just some lineart. It is of Sasha, and I'm planning to ink it. I want you guys to critique the crap out of this one, okay! (But don't kill it please? lol.)I've written a poem to accompany it.
Even in the Snow
Even in the snow
I can find beauty
It comes in the form
Of a snow butterfly
So delicate, and yet
so enduring
as it has endured
the harshest of winters
and next to the butterfly,
watching it rise
into the heights
of the ever- thick pines
She walks, the beauty
deep in the snow,
with frosted hair
and deep green eyes
she shows that,
like the butterfly,
there is life
even in this
wastelandish domain.
Hope you enjoyed it! I know I did.
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Comments: 39
awww, this is cute! ...ooh but her tummy must be cold! D:
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She has fur, and her fur is thicker during the winter. If she wore a full coat, it would be too hot.
Thanks for the compliment though.
I really would like some critique on my art ... but you're so busy, so I won't bother you about it.
(A thought occured to me.... if her tummy was cold, I would rub it and warm it up for her. [No other words to describe it, sorry if it sounds... erm... dirty...] Though I'm not sure Blaze would agree with this action from me. lol.)
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Hahaha he'd kick your BUTT!
Critique:
The eyes are a little -off...
I would recommend practicing on hair and furr...
Your paper is smudgey, but that's nothing we can't fix, right? ^^ Try shading from left to right if you're right handed. Mabey that'll help!
Other than that, I would like to say that your proportions are always on tha spot, that of which I have troubles with.
There's your critique!
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Oh yes... I almost forgot.... Blaze WOULD kick my butt.
*naked ninja runs by*
*bounty hunter runs by*
*Kerpow runs by with giant weapon*
Didn't we just act out that scene earlier? :eyepooping:
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Whith his blaze of fury fire breath. *phew!* Did i mention it's smelly?
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I never said he had fire breath! lol! Nah, he'd just blast me with that miniature ionization projection system strapped to his armi in his debut picture.
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ACK! He's polish it 'nall just for yah, hun. Hahaha
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yes, the eyes are slightly off. but, now that i've inked it, It's a little too late, maybe it's fixed now.
hmmm.... I do need practice on hair (you should have seen my earliest renderations of hair, not proud at all.) a guide would help, but I'm broke lol.
I'm left handed, and I shade downwards in my inking. It solves a problem I used to have. (the shading would become inconsistant, and look funny.)
Yes, my paper is smudgy, but I erase all excess lines in the final product.
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*nod* *nod* There are PLENTY of free tutorials on here!
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ah....
*big puppy eyes*
show me!
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You can just find some!!! type in hair tutorial!
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oh, okay! thx!
BtW: I really want you to come to the chat room and meet some artists I know. We had a blast today. Really random conversations that nothing to do with anything.
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heheh, if you insist. ^^ please provide zhe link!
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[link]
I'm not sure if you can get in like this... I'll provide more info if you can't
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well, I should be on a lot of the day tomorrow... I thin I'll try to sneak a picture into my scraps... you can save it or something to your cpu, and I can get rid of it before my mom finds out... she'll be gone all tomorrow.
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NONO! You really shouldn't do that! It's not good to disobey you mummy! Don't do that!
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true.... true.... I rethought it anyway... not gonna do it... I can wait two years...
plots for his descent ion into the underworld.
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that is.... descent into the underworld.... and by that I mean, that I can wait two years to post a pic of myself when I go to college.
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*nod* *nod* You made a wise decision young grasshoppah*
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I shall mastah the aut of pencil and papah!
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HAHAHA That was really funny.
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This thread and a lot of the other ones are really old, and yet still active threads... it's funny almost.
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Perhaps, it is time.... to end this thread? I feel sad... but we don't have to end it. Actually, I'm sure that the next post will prevent it!
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uh...
tyoe in AnthroArtistsClub in chatroom search engine... I'm in there, ever day.
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lol, nice reply. Short sweet, amibiguous, and vague.
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yes, vague. (I needed a third word for my list.)
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