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devALLjapan — AWAY from LOVE by-nc-nd
Published: 2010-06-01 05:53:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 1194; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 4
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Description Away
She runs
From me
Is it because I am a girl?
And that she is too?
Does she find me sickening?
Why does she run?
Run away from me?
Run away to him
I said that I loved her
She said it back
Im sure that she did
Or...was it just all in my head?
That magical night
When I finaly confessed my feelings for her

Why?
Oh why do you run?
Away...from love...?
From me?
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Comments: 15

Lightkun6060 [2010-06-03 13:48:46 +0000 UTC]

Though all the sexes are reversed, I had the exact same situation.... I really like this poem though

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devALLjapan In reply to Lightkun6060 [2010-06-04 02:26:26 +0000 UTC]



thankyou

and im sorry that youve had first hand experiance in this

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PaleRedSin [2010-06-03 07:33:25 +0000 UTC]

...This hits home a little too closely for comfort...but thank you for writing this.

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devALLjapan In reply to PaleRedSin [2010-06-04 02:26:45 +0000 UTC]

no problem friend

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orosylfos [2010-06-03 05:34:44 +0000 UTC]

Aww, I got reminded of someone I once had a crush on. Good job, you.

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devALLjapan In reply to orosylfos [2010-06-03 06:00:54 +0000 UTC]

thankyou
im pleased that i wrote it right

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mylovebattlefield09 [2010-06-03 05:08:53 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful.

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devALLjapan In reply to mylovebattlefield09 [2010-06-03 06:01:12 +0000 UTC]



thank you very much

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mylovebattlefield09 In reply to devALLjapan [2010-06-06 05:44:15 +0000 UTC]

You're incredibly welcome. It was gorgeous. Very emotive.

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devALLjapan In reply to mylovebattlefield09 [2010-06-06 22:40:55 +0000 UTC]

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Psychedelic-Freakout [2010-06-01 17:42:38 +0000 UTC]

eeeh
i like so much, i felt like you describes...
Really good ^^

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devALLjapan In reply to Psychedelic-Freakout [2010-06-02 01:00:13 +0000 UTC]

for realz?



aww thnxu so much...im glad i wrote it right

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Soda-Snuggles [2010-06-01 05:56:43 +0000 UTC]

Awwww! :')

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devALLjapan In reply to Soda-Snuggles [2010-06-01 05:59:06 +0000 UTC]

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Soda-Snuggles In reply to devALLjapan [2010-06-01 06:00:12 +0000 UTC]

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