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Published: 2012-05-20 12:20:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 798; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 4
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I really do love my OC Jorunn ^^Okay, I know this is doing well, but I am going to submit is to the anyway, because I know it can do better. Any suggestions on how to improve this would be really appreciated. Like what type of back-ground to do and what more I can do to the image to make it stand of and be more WOW.
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oh, terribly sorry, i seem to be raping ur gallery xDD
*thought i was watching you* <.< .... >_>;;
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Don't worry it isn't rape, my gallery is coming hard bro
Aint rape, is making love
(OH GOD THAT SOUNDS SO LIKE SO MUCH WRONG)
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YES! tis called:
Fornicating
Under
Consentful
Knowledge
wait that's one hell of an acronym O_O
...*scribbles '-ing'* LOL. FORGIVE ME I'M 12.
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lighting in the hair brah
and maybe some more detailed shadin in the pants :U
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yeah I spose, I'll wait a while and see if I get any feedbackf rom the group or not o3o
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The adoptable stops dancing once she notices you. Her cheeks darken and she stumbles abruptly before standing straight and looks at you.
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I stand there looking at her with a pout "damn it., Look I'm sure you pretty much hate me already but..."
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Jorunn frowns and turns to face you properly. She doesn't say anything but instead waits for you to go on.
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I pause "... I have nothing more to say... I just think you hate me don't you? if you don't stop being such a grumpy bugger and be happier..."
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Jorunns face contorts in offence and she turns from you straightening her shirt as she goes over to get a bottle of water. Taking the lid off she goes off on a rant. "Well, I am so-rry if my being unhappy breaks the mould of your ordinary OC. I mean, it isn't my fault that I have this personality. It isn't my fault that I don't like hugs, or that I can dance well or that I get generally pissed off easily. I mean, it's just the way I am. So sorry to bust your bubble but I'm not going to be a happy go lucky hug everybody smile happy happy gay little shit of an OC!" Her face flushed red and huffing from wallking about and ranting Jorunn sits heavily onto the couch and looks away from you with a pout.
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I look at Jorunn for a moment before laughing
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I join in unable to restrain myself and Jorunns cheeks flush a deeper red. she throws the bottles cap at us. "Hey, SHUDDUP!" She grumbles to herself having another drink.
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I stop laughing after a moment "HeeHee... sorry heee"
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Jorunn just glares at you, but her heart isn't in it. "No your not."
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Jorunn says nothing and just looks away huffing a little sigh. "Jorunn, have I ever told you that you act like you have a stick up yoour ass?"
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I laugh "that was in Torchwood just now... does the stick up her ass have a stick up it's ass? lol Owen quote 'y'know what Tosh, someties I think the stick up your ass has a stick up it's ass' it's so funny I love owen"
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"Okay, haha, I like that, I like it, suits Jorunn to a 'T'!"
Jorunn just sits there indifferently and takes a drink.
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"Well, that was an effective RP."
"How, all you did was make fin of me!"
I just grin in return.
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"Duh!" I say with a look on my face that says "That was the point"
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Jorunn grits her teeth. "Well, you can;t do that if I go." At this she gets up from the couch, collects the cap from the ground then leaves the room in an angry manor her barefeet padding loudly on the floorboards.
"Oh wow, I really gotta find a way to sought out her personality. She cannot storm out of the room or just makeout with people when things get tricky."
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she can what? oh you mean she can continue storming out of rooms
making out randomly with people and shizzle like that?
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hellz yes it makes for comedy
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and drama, sheesh. Shes an emotional train wreck that one o3o
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XDXD
she makes me laugh too, she's pretty cool
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yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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Aww, thank you so much!
I am really happy with how this turned out ^^
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