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Di-Star — Short Hair
Published: 2007-08-12 18:33:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 1189; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 6
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My own Character with short hair ^^Related content
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Not bad.
Her facial proportions look a bit bowed. Like she's holding her head down and out while looking over her shoulder. And to see that much face from the side her head would be more squared with her neck and body.
I feel like I want more definition from her back and shoulders but can't quite pin that down.
Her elbows though, they look to much of the same. Give me some more directional clothing fold definition there. Bunched at the pit, tighter and flowing from the elbow.
Back hand suffers from *Sausage Fingers* not much else to say there.
~my two cents
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=o oooo ^-^ you've done it really well :3 the hair could use some work though ^-^ its really cool though
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