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Published: 2019-04-03 21:35:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 188; Favourites: 12; Downloads: 0
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I have done it again
become the Apparition
transformed at the command
tell me, how does it feel
ghosting on edge
not yet awake

and air, remember that?
like divers, rationed
words and breath
fasting, prepare our body
to receive
sweetly
spread open like an ancient map
draped in gone epistolaries
draw light into the mortuary
say no more apologies

blushing hot then ashing after
hung at dawn is the usual trade
though it is a bit old-fashioned
but I am no sage
my seance days are not at hand
still, read me that book again
that rhyme, that chant, that rich-toned chorus
Iโ€™ll snap up glorious words and words
I am always hungry

auger, unleash my eyes!
so the seer can finally see
and taste this lovely bloody feast
minor, major chords struck into skin
in singing we tear the throat
cabled surface holds too tightly
drawn like a bow across
it grips and rips
into supple neck flesh

Pray, I whisper
tell me what you feel
as I suck you dry
my thirst is vast
and I eat men like air

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Comments: 17

KiriHearts [2019-05-18 23:41:18 +0000 UTC]

Oooh, I love this. As a music teacher, my favorite part obviously is

"minor, major chords struck into skin
in singing we tear the throat
cabled surface holds too tightly"



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dialtonepoetry In reply to KiriHearts [2019-05-29 18:47:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I love music references too ย 

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thebalefulprimal [2019-04-30 19:08:14 +0000 UTC]

Pray, I whisper
tell me what youย feel
as I suck you dry
my thirst is vast
and I eat men like air


I loooooooove this.

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dialtonepoetry In reply to thebalefulprimal [2019-04-30 20:29:17 +0000 UTC]

Thaaaank you! ย 

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ilyilaice [2019-04-14 15:55:05 +0000 UTC]

The language here is so incredibly striking! My favorite stanza is the last one.

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dialtonepoetry In reply to ilyilaice [2019-04-15 14:57:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I'm really glad you like it!ย 

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SubjugatedSandwich [2019-04-09 08:01:18 +0000 UTC]

The imagery in this is really something. Those last two stanzas get intense fast!

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dialtonepoetry In reply to SubjugatedSandwich [2019-04-09 16:52:22 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Yeah, there's really not a way to say "I eat men" besides go straight for it!ย 

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LiliWrites [2019-04-09 03:42:30 +0000 UTC]

Some seriously striking imagery in this. Excellent use of the prompt.ย 

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dialtonepoetry In reply to LiliWrites [2019-04-09 16:50:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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gliitchlord [2019-04-04 15:09:45 +0000 UTC]

haha never whoops this is good

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dialtonepoetry In reply to gliitchlord [2019-04-04 15:42:03 +0000 UTC]

Thanks gliitch! ย 

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the-chemical-factory [2019-04-04 01:22:52 +0000 UTC]

"like divers, rationed
words and breath
fasting, prepare our body
to receive
sweetly
spread open like an ancient map
draped in gone epistolaries
draw light into the mortuary
say no more apologies"

wow i love this!!! and i love that plath quote at the end i immediately got excited ahahย 
wonderful work

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dialtonepoetry In reply to the-chemical-factory [2019-04-04 14:52:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!! I was reading a whole bunch of her poetry before writing this, and I think some of her rage rubbed off lol.ย 

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squibblyquill [2019-04-03 22:35:37 +0000 UTC]

dark, but has its moments...worth a read, definitely. Though, I prefer my men with blood rather than bone dry.

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dialtonepoetry In reply to squibblyquill [2019-04-04 14:54:25 +0000 UTC]

Yes, there's something to be said for keeping your men bloody. To each their own! ย 

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squibblyquill In reply to dialtonepoetry [2019-04-04 20:11:10 +0000 UTC]

Indeed. Cheers!

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