Comments: 17
KiriHearts [2019-05-18 23:41:18 +0000 UTC]
Oooh, I love this. As a music teacher, my favorite part obviously is
"minor, major chords struck into skin
in singing we tear the throat
cabled surface holds too tightly"
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thebalefulprimal [2019-04-30 19:08:14 +0000 UTC]
Pray, I whisper
tell me what youย feel
as I suck you dry
my thirst is vast
and I eat men like air
I loooooooove this.
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LiliWrites [2019-04-09 03:42:30 +0000 UTC]
Some seriously striking imagery in this. Excellent use of the prompt.ย
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gliitchlord [2019-04-04 15:09:45 +0000 UTC]
haha never whoops this is good
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the-chemical-factory [2019-04-04 01:22:52 +0000 UTC]
"like divers, rationed
words and breath
fasting, prepare our body
to receive
sweetly
spread open like an ancient map
draped in gone epistolaries
draw light into the mortuary
say no more apologies"
wow i love this!!! and i love that plath quote at the end i immediately got excited ahahย
wonderful work
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squibblyquill [2019-04-03 22:35:37 +0000 UTC]
dark, but has its moments...worth a read, definitely. Though, I prefer my men with blood rather than bone dry.
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