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diridiri [2012-05-05 18:48:11 +0000 UTC]
I read fanfiction site before it
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olivtrad [2011-02-13 22:59:19 +0000 UTC]
have you upload it on fanfiction.com? :3
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AnimeMischief [2010-01-12 04:19:08 +0000 UTC]
Very interesting and well thought out you wrapped it up to quickly, it should have a second chapter. I'm doing a crossover fanfic of naruto, bleach, code geass and other random anime charaters based on Darkthewise's altered and what if aranncar pics [link] so this is very interesting
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Kayleigh-Kun [2009-10-29 18:05:57 +0000 UTC]
awesome!
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Diyaru4500 [2009-09-16 12:32:30 +0000 UTC]
I would love to see(more like read) Sakura expression to seeing Kenpachi XD
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SakuraHaruno95 [2009-05-09 21:44:22 +0000 UTC]
Please can you write a chapter two on deviantart??
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xx-asami-xx [2008-05-06 10:50:44 +0000 UTC]
present tense!!!????!!! WOW!!!!!!! you're an extremely talented author if you can write in present tense like this!!! good on you!
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xx-asami-xx In reply to xx-asami-xx [2008-05-08 09:22:29 +0000 UTC]
lol i usually don't read crossovers, but i enjoyed this one... it made me laugh!!!! especially the description of Matsumoto-fukutaichou!!!!
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PsylentFox [2008-02-17 23:21:26 +0000 UTC]
A very awesome story. It makes me wonder if you plan to update this with another chapter...followed by another chapter...and another...and another...and so on and so forth. I really enjoyed your writing style, very unique with a great flow and a descriptive feel. I would have thought that Naruto would have been able to see the Hollows because of the Kyuubi, since it is otherworldly in nature...and I doubt that Kyuubi would have wanted his host fighting blind...but thats just my opinion.
Great story, hope to see an update if at all.
~ILF
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diamondsforever In reply to PsylentFox [2008-02-18 02:17:13 +0000 UTC]
xD I am planning to rewrite this, though progress has been slow due to school etc.
But I surely will. :3
Thankies! <3
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14j [2008-02-09 02:08:04 +0000 UTC]
Awesome good story wonderful writing.
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number-one-witch [2008-01-27 01:38:20 +0000 UTC]
Kick ass story, man. Nicely done!
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AyaketsuHitsugaya [2007-12-24 02:59:19 +0000 UTC]
Plus, can I draw a doujinshi of this?
(That random person, once again. *sigh* )
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AyaketsuHitsugaya In reply to diamondsforever [2007-12-26 18:53:46 +0000 UTC]
Please oh please oh PLEASE!!!! I JUST LOVE THIS STORY TOO MUCH!!!! I was like NOOOOO seeing that there were only two chapters. Now that my sis and I have a tablet, the doujinshi may appear quickly. I will Watch you!!!!
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MiaLuvA [2007-10-31 03:09:22 +0000 UTC]
I love your story!! Its so fckin GOOD!! you're a good writer
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Ignis-Wolf [2007-07-29 18:03:09 +0000 UTC]
Very nice! Now that I think of it Toshiro and Sakura would make a very cute couple. By the way, did you continue this on Fanfiction.net?
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shikaki [2007-07-20 03:42:29 +0000 UTC]
awesome story!
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liseylosey [2007-05-05 04:07:16 +0000 UTC]
Just under wonderment are you still doong this story on fanficion.net because you havent updated and it a good story.
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hippies-are-cool [2007-04-18 01:36:05 +0000 UTC]
THAT IS SO AWESOME!!!!!!
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fdfgfgf13 In reply to diamondsforever [2009-07-28 05:26:34 +0000 UTC]
I Love it
you really
SHOULD keep
going on this
crossover!!!!!!
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srt4reddragon [2007-01-06 03:42:35 +0000 UTC]
Aww! Awesome story. Any room for an update?
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diamondsforever In reply to srt4reddragon [2007-01-06 04:27:20 +0000 UTC]
Check out my fanfiction.net account. I use the same username there.
Yay - glad you like it!! ^^
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