Comments: 70
monkeylvr13 [2013-04-01 05:48:31 +0000 UTC]
very interesting! and cool!
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dibstah [2012-03-04 04:21:12 +0000 UTC]
This is really well written
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dieingcity In reply to dibstah [2012-03-04 16:43:08 +0000 UTC]
thank you so much...i'm really glad you like it ^^
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dibstah In reply to dieingcity [2012-03-04 20:09:03 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome ^^
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Teleway [2012-02-29 04:13:50 +0000 UTC]
I loved it~ I can't wait to read more!
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dieingcity In reply to Teleway [2012-02-29 15:25:14 +0000 UTC]
thank you so much- chapter two has just been released ^^- the link is now on the authors comments of this page ^^
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The-Last-Dragon [2012-02-29 02:52:47 +0000 UTC]
AWESOME!!!! I can't wait to read more about these four!
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dieingcity In reply to The-Last-Dragon [2012-02-29 15:25:53 +0000 UTC]
thank you so much- I'm so happy you really enjoyed it- chapter two has just been released, you can find the link on the authors comments of this
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dieingcity In reply to Aminada [2012-02-29 15:26:33 +0000 UTC]
hooray, I'm really glad you loved it.
I liked adding the good inspector to this- it was too fun not too
thank you again for enjoying this fiction ^^
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Mercury-Lamre [2012-02-28 01:17:32 +0000 UTC]
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OH MY BLOODY LORD I LOVE YOU QAQ
YOU ACTUALLY DID IT OMG.
...I may have to turn these chapters into an actual doujin. :I I may have to.
That though my friend.
Was the best thing I have read in forever.
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dieingcity In reply to Mercury-Lamre [2012-02-28 15:03:08 +0000 UTC]
i'm so glad you liked it that much *blushes*
and if you would like to turn this into a doujin
i'd love it!
^^
thank you again for you wonderful comment...it thrills me to know you really liked this fiction so much ^^
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mabpanda [2012-02-27 17:56:50 +0000 UTC]
oh.......oh my goodness. you....you.....THANK YOU!!!
this is wonderful! i was hoping someone would do something like this! and you did!
wonderfully written! good job!
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dieingcity In reply to mabpanda [2012-02-27 19:18:30 +0000 UTC]
your very, very welcome- i'm really glad that you enjoyed it so much and thought it was wonderfully written, it is very kind and encouraging of you to say- thank you ^_^
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dieingcity In reply to Gryffgirl [2012-02-27 14:56:20 +0000 UTC]
hooray! *throws flower petals over everything*
i'm really happy you enjoyed this first chapter...it has been quite some time
since I last put out a long fan fiction, and it made me a bit anxious ^^
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Dragora-kun [2012-02-27 11:31:23 +0000 UTC]
that is spectacular! I love the way you've written it! The behaviour of them and its just so perfect. Very good description, i really like the description of the 'headless carriage'. I can not wait to see more bonnefoy omg just that small sentence and already you can tell the personality your putting on him and i really look forward to see more of him. very funny and the dialogue is very good for that time so bravo!
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dieingcity In reply to Dragora-kun [2012-02-27 14:57:20 +0000 UTC]
yeah hooray thank you so much *Squeals*
I was rather nervous about putting this up it has been ages since i put up a long fan fiction, and was worried
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Dragora-kun In reply to dieingcity [2012-02-28 00:22:28 +0000 UTC]
no need to be at all. you've really thought this through and it worked very well. ^_^
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Ameriiko [2012-02-27 08:58:09 +0000 UTC]
........*died and went to heaven*
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dieingcity In reply to Ameriiko [2012-02-27 14:58:34 +0000 UTC]
*feels giddy and giggles*
i'm so glad you liked it that much
I had been nervous about putting this out...so i'm so pleased with the wonderful responses ^^
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Ameriiko In reply to dieingcity [2012-02-27 15:37:29 +0000 UTC]
You should never be nervous silly! Everything you do is awesome and me and all your fans agree!
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maki013 [2012-02-27 03:21:50 +0000 UTC]
this is AWESOME!! at first the speech manner suprised me a little but it's really cool to see the charaters talk in such a formal manner
i can't wait for what happens next!!!
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dieingcity In reply to maki013 [2012-02-27 14:59:19 +0000 UTC]
yeah- thank you so much i'm really happy that you enjoyed it so much.
I will do my best to have the next chapter out quickly ^^
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AlicePhantomhive1 [2012-02-27 02:32:11 +0000 UTC]
Must...have more....*watchs ep 2 of Sherlock season 1 to pass time*
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dieingcity In reply to AlicePhantomhive1 [2012-02-29 15:20:05 +0000 UTC]
aww...- and second chapter is out now ;D- its actually a little short than the last chapter ^_^
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SapphireSky1992 [2012-02-27 01:42:23 +0000 UTC]
This is really good :3
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windalchemist001 [2012-02-27 00:23:42 +0000 UTC]
ugg england is so mean to poor alfred and matthew. well at least france came to save the day well kind of but yeah .... so yeah it all iggys fault!!!! oh and i can't wait till the next chapter ^_^
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dieingcity In reply to windalchemist001 [2012-02-27 00:27:05 +0000 UTC]
i'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter ^_^ i will try to get the second one up soon
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Raelover [2012-02-27 00:00:25 +0000 UTC]
ooh, i just love this to bits!
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