artsypantsy [2016-03-03 21:09:15 +0000 UTC]
Not bad. I like the choice of images and the composition. The black figure is a bit out of place, however. I am not sure if that was the intended effect, but you could possibly try to make him a bit more grey. The destruction and smoke looks cool, but we can see a bit of the original picture in the smoke on the left, it seems like there is some kind of building. It seems like there is also some sort of very faint box around the smoke, almost at the height of her knees.Don't give up, you're getting better.
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din1919 In reply to artsypantsy [2016-03-04 05:46:48 +0000 UTC]
"I am not sure if that was the intended effect, but you could possibly try to make him a bit more grey"Yes i try to make him have a shape , not flat
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