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Published: 2005-08-23 22:28:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 2541; Favourites: 59; Downloads: 21
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Description I could stay awake all night
Just to feel you next to me
Everything, it felt alright
When I could hear you breathing
And when you’d finally wake
The world around you could go crazy
But in my eyes, you’re still
The only one I’m seeing

Every little thing you do
Always makes me smile
And every little thing you do
Is worth all my while
I could watch your every move
And never grow tired of you
All that made you, you
Kept me all the more endeared
Every one of your quirks
And everything that makes you weird


Those eyes that you have
Have a hold on me
And the way that you laugh
Is there to remind me
That everything is fine
All that I need is mine

I could stay still in every moment
And never wake up again

But you just couldn’t
You couldn’t just let me be
You turned your back
And walked away from me
I came crashing to the ground
And I looked up to find you
But you’re no where to be found
And I’m back to seeing through
everyone that I come to know
They’re all the same;
They all come and go
No one will ever
Amount to you
But then again
Neither did you
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Comments: 13

PorcelainMalice [2018-01-16 11:02:48 +0000 UTC]

Truth... sometimes the ones we look at the most.. leave. And leave nothing but empty mist where they once were.

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bellascribbles [2010-08-12 03:25:30 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful.

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laapdance [2010-06-07 23:32:11 +0000 UTC]

Sounds like "I dont wanna miss a thing" from aerosmith

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Deemond [2009-08-02 04:57:29 +0000 UTC]

i dont think the feeling could be put better

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vampireknightfan [2009-05-31 05:42:57 +0000 UTC]

*sniffle* Beautiful.

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jadDino [2009-03-31 03:58:55 +0000 UTC]

*faving* I just loved this, unfortunately we all have that kind of letdown. I really loved this!!

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ArtFrEaK331 [2008-12-12 18:57:33 +0000 UTC]

That was amazing. It really speaks to what I'm going through.
Thankyou for writing this.

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jmusashi [2005-08-24 12:13:22 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful!^_^

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shatteringdreams [2005-08-24 03:53:42 +0000 UTC]

this is awsome. I kinda know the feeling...very lovely

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Dinodude150 In reply to shatteringdreams [2005-08-24 11:30:38 +0000 UTC]

Rock on...

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snoopythesmarty [2005-08-23 22:33:04 +0000 UTC]

awww thats so nice and so pretty.... and yet so depressing at the end BUT I LOVE IT! ^^

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NightShadow303 [2005-08-23 22:30:11 +0000 UTC]

Excellent writing! *steals your skills* I love the flow and the rhyme and the expression!

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Dinodude150 In reply to NightShadow303 [2005-08-23 22:32:05 +0000 UTC]

Thanks alot for the favorite. I wrote it thinking about a friend.

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